The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000.
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The chart below shows the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in 2000.
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the bar chat display the principal ways of duration on between smartphones and tables, by different category.
overall, the majority prople spent more time on games between both devices. which is highest ratio for both device. however, for news people show their less interest on both smart gadgests.
in tables, 60% of the prople uses thst for playing games, which is 30% greater than that of smartphones. social networking is use by 205 citizen and this figure is almost halved in tablets(405). moreover, the category of unspecified people is 6% and 10% in smartphones and tablests respectively.
conversely, in tables, games are chosen by more than half of total population (66%), which is the highest proporation between two modern communication devices, while 45% prople use it on smartphones. utilities is popular among 26% in smartphone, whereas only 6% citizen use that on tables .
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The bar chart depicts the proportion of female aged between 16 and 25 who participated in different kind of sports in a particular country and compare with the participant of individual who watched them in the year of 2000.
Overall, tennis showed the highest percentage in watching, while participating witnessed the least ratio on horse riding and racing . however , watching shorts had a higher proportion in four sports as opposed to participating.
In term of watching sports, 60% of people watched tennis which is 30% higher then that participant. basketball showed by almost 55% and it was followed by participating females at 50%. gymnastic noted 20% on watching ,while partici
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#In term of watching sports, 60% of people watched tennis which was 30% higher then that participant- in terms of watching sports, 60% of people watched tennis, which was 30% higher than the participation figure.
#basketball showed by almost 55% and it was followed by participating females at 50% – Basketball was watched by almost 55%, followed by 50% of participating females.
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The bar chart displayed the percentage of females aged between 16 to 25 in particular country who participated in sports in year 2000.
overall, the mejority of females watching tennis more then played .However, for participating horse riding and racing they show less interest on that .
In terms of tennis, 60% of people watched that . Which was the halved in participanting on that. Basketball watched by around 55% people, and participating on that was 50%, which followed on that.
Conversely, in gaymnastics their was huge differance between boths sector, which was 20% and nearly 10% respectively. badmainton , was more popular for playing rather than watching, which was above 10% and almost 5% respectivile, whereas only horse riding and racing is the lowest in
#The bar chart displayed the percentage of females aged between 16 to 25 in particular country who participated in sports in year 2000 –
The bar chart displays the percentage of females aged between 16 and 25 in a particular country who participated in sports in the year 2000.
#overall, the mejority of females watching tennis more then played –
Overall, the majority of females watched tennis more than they played it.
#However, for participating horse riding and racing they show less interest on that –
However, for horse riding and racing, they showed less interest in participating.
#In terms of tennis, 60% of people watched that . Which was the halved in participanting on that –
In terms of tennis, 60% of people watched it, which was double the participation rate.
#Basketball watched by around 55% people, and participating on that was 50%, which followed on that-
Basketball was watched by around 55% of people, and participation was 50%, following a similar trend.
#Conversely, in gaymnastics their was huge differance between boths sector, which was 20% and nearly 10% respectively –
Conversely, in gymnastics, there was a huge difference between both sectors, with 20% watching and nearly 10% participating.
#badmainton , was more popular for playing rather than watching, which was above 10% and almost 5% respectivile –
Badminton was more popular for playing than watching, with participation above 10% and watching at almost 5%.
#whereas only horse riding and racing is the lowest in –
Whereas horse riding and racing had the lowest figures for both watching and participating.
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The chart illustrates percentage of females aged between 16 to 25 of a particular country who took part in sports in comparison with the percentage of people who watched them in the year 2000.
Overall, it is clear that percentage of people were watching tennis and basketball took the biggest share on people watching and playing, while categories like horse riding and racing, badminton and gymnastics accounted for the smallest percentage.
In the case of people watching, tennis took highest portion at 60%, followed by basketball at 50%, while gymnastics had 1/3 of basketball. However golf, horse riding and racing along with badminton had the lowest proportion at 10% or below.
In terms of people who participated, the highest portion was shared by basketball at 50% along with golf and tennis with the same proportion of 30%, while badminton, gymnastics and horse riding and racing had percentage of 11% or below.
#The chart illustrates percentage of females aged between 16 to 25 –
The chart illustrates the percentage of females aged between 16 and 25.
#who took part in sports in comparison with the percentage of people who watched them –
who took part in sports compared with the percentage of people who watched them.
#In the case of people watching, tennis took highest portion –
In the case of people watching, tennis took the highest portion.
#gymnastics had 1/3 of basketball –
gymnastics had one-third of the figure for basketball.
#However golf, horse riding and racing along with badminton had the lowest proportion –
However, golf, horse riding and racing, along with badminton, had the lowest proportion.
#had percentage of 11% or below –
had a percentage of 11% or below.
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The chart provides information about the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular nation who played in sports, compared with the percentage of individuals who watched them in the year 2000.
Overall, watching tennis done was the highest number of females, while participating horse riding and racing was prefer the least. However, basketball was similar number of people watch and participate.
In terms of watched tennis by 60% of individuals which is the highest amount, followed by participated was 30% less than watched. Compare with basketball similar number of individuals watch and play sports was 55% and 50%. However, badminton most people
#Overall, watching tennis done was the highest number of females –
Overall, watching tennis was done by the highest number of females.
#participating horse riding and racing was prefer the least –
Participating in horse riding and racing was the least preferred.
#Compare with basketball similar number of individuals watch and play sports was 55% and 50% –
Compared with basketball, a similar number of individuals watched and played the sport, 55% and 50% respectively.
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The bar charts compares the proportion of females aged 16-25 particular country playing sports or watching sports who watched them in year 2000.
overall, the percentage of watching tennis by females was the highest proportion .While a lower proportion was for participating at horse riding and racing .moreover ,watching and participating on baskester ball was almost equll rate showing a very minimal differances.
In terems of watching tennis by females is the highest share at about 60
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#While a lower proportion was for participating at horse riding and racing –
While a lower proportion was for participation in horse riding and racing.
#moreover ,watching and participating on baskester ball was almost equll rate showing a very minimal differances –
Moreover, watching and participating in basketball were at almost equal rates, showing minimal differences.(spelling,sentence making)
#In terems of watching tennis by females is the highest share at about 60 –
In terms of watching tennis, females had the highest share, at about 60%.
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The pie chat illiusrtates the proporation of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of people who watched them in the year 2000.
Overall,the watching tennis sports the higest percantage in female,while the lowest proporation participating riding and racing both watiching and participating. however, tennis and basketball both were similler participating.
in teram of the the watching tennis,which was 60%.but paricipating tennis only just 30%.the gymnastices the highest percantge was 20% in watching playing sports while participating about 8% reapectively.both basketball,wtching and participating less 5% lowest than.
badmintion and horse rinding and racing the proporation lowest in both ietam watching and participating.however,golf percantage was 30% than watching sports less than that.
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#both basketball,wtching and participating less 5% lowest than –
For basketball, watching and participation were about 5% lower than tennis.
#in teram of the the watching tennis,which was 60%.but paricipating tennis only just 30% –
In terms of watching tennis, 60% of females watched it, while participation was only 30%.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of females aged 16-25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared with the percentage of individual who watched them in the year 2000.
Overall, the majority ages people access through watching tennis , while participating witnessed the least ratio on horse riding and racing, however, watching sports had higher proportion in four sports as opposed to participating.
with regard to the percentage of watching sports accounted for tennis on age 60, while gymnsti
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With regard to watching sports, tennis accounted for about 60%, while gymnastics………..
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The chart illustrate the percentage of females aged 16 to 25 in a particular country who participated in sports, compared the percentage of individual who watch them in a particular year.
Overall, the percentage of watching tennis by female was the highest proportion, while a lower proportion was for participating the horse riding and racing. Moreover, watching and participating on basketball was almost equal percentage, showing a very minimal difference.
In terms of watching tennis, by female is the highest share, at about 60 %, and the proportion of participating was halved in tennis. In addition, watching basketball by female is nearly 55% and is the second largest proportion among them, followed by participating in basketball, at 50%, respectively.
However, the participating in golf was about 30%, which is 20% less than that of watching golf by females. Furthermore, 20% female was watching gymnastic and it is the theird highest proportion, and it is almost 95
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#In terms of watching tennis, by female is the highest share, at about 60 %, and the proportion of participating was halved in tennis –
In terms of watching tennis, females had the highest share, at about 60%, while participation was about half of that.
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The bar chart illustrates the percentages of females age 16 participated in the six different sports in a particular country , compared with the number of individuals who watched them in the year 2000.
Overall, with regard to the proportion of female , tennis had the highest figures of watching, while the horse riding and racing accounted for a much lower number of participating. However, the difference of proportion between watching and participating was very minimal.
With regard to the participator of watching sports, tennis had the highest proportion, at 60%, which is followed by basketball about 55%. Moving the gymnestics it accounted for 20%, but this ratio was significantly lower in looking for badminton, almost 5%. Notably, horse riding and racing had represented a much lower percentage than golf.
Regarding participating, basketball witnessed largest proportion, at 50%, while o tennis and golf marked the same, each standing at 30%. Moreover, gymnastics notes almost 5%, whereas horse riding
#However, the difference of proportion between watching and participating was very minimal –
However, for some sports, the difference between watching and participating was minimal.
##Moving the gymnestics it accounted for 20%, but this ratio was significantly lower in looking for badminton, almost 5% –
Gymnastics accounted for 20%, while badminton was much lower, at almost 5%.
##Regarding participating, basketball witnessed largest proportion, at 50%, while o tennis and golf marked the same, each standing at 30% –
Regarding participation, basketball had the largest proportion at 50%, while tennis and golf were equal, each at 30%.
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The given chart illustrates the proportion of females aged between 16-25 in a specific country playing sports or watching sports in the year 2000.
Overall, with regard to the watching sports, which was the highest proportion both in tennis and basketball, while the participating was the lowest for every sports. However, the gymnastics and golf games was the similar percentage for participating.
It is clear that the number of watching, which was significant largest in tennis at 60 while in basketball followed that with approximately 55.
In gymnastics people watch sports at 20 whereas golf was 10 less than that. Furthermore, badminton and horse riding and racing was similar number at 5 chronologically.
Moreover, the proportion of participator, basketball was the highest player which was 50 whereas the badminton was about 38 less than that. Notably, tennis and golf while they followed same trend at 30 respectively. gymnastic and horse riding and racing was less than 10 .
#However, the gymnastics and golf games was the similar percentage for participating –
However, participation in gymnastics and golf was at a similar percentage.
#gymnastic and horse riding and racing was less than 10 –
Participation in gymnastics and horse riding and racing was less than 10%.
#Furthermore, badminton and horse riding and racing was similar number at 5 chronologically –
Furthermore, badminton and horse riding and racing had similar proportions, at about 5% each.
#It is clear that the number of watching, which was significant largest in tennis at 60 while in basketball followed that with approximately 55 –
It is clear that watching was highest for tennis at 60%, followed by basketball at approximately 55%.
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The given chart illustrates the rate of females aged 16-25 in a specific country who participated in sports ,compared with the percentage of individual who watched them in the year 2000 .
Looking from an overall perspective , tennis had the highest figure in watching ,while horse riding and racing accounted for a much lower number in participating . However , for basketball , the difference of numbers between watching and participating was very minimal .
In terms of watching sports , tennis has the largest figure with 60 , while basketball followed it by almost 55 . Notably , badminton and horse riding and racing had almost the same number , both resersing below 10 . Gymnastic has 20 number , while golf was half pf that .
regarding to participating, basketball held in 50 , while tennis accounted 20 number less than that .The number of badminton participate was almost 11 , whereas the gymnastic followed by approximately 9 . Horse riding and racing was accounted for a lowest figure , which was nearly 3 . The number of participators in golf was 30 .
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#In terms of watching sports , tennis has the largest figure with 60 , while basketball followed it by almost 55 –
In terms of watching sports, tennis had the highest figure at 60%, followed by basketball at about 55%.
#Notably , badminton and horse riding and racing had almost the same number , both resersing below 10 –
Notably, badminton and horse riding and racing had similar percentages, both below 10%.
#Gymnastic has 20 number , while golf was half pf that –
Gymnastics accounted for 20%, while golf was about half of that.
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