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The charts detail the number of participants at the Olympics every 30 years from 1924 to 2014 in total and by gender.

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  1. The bar chart display data on the number of men and women participants in Olympic games, as well as the total number of participants, over the specific year between 1924 and 2014.

    Overall, both men and women participation saw a significant upward trend, unpredictable increase in the total number of participants. Notably the growth in women participants was more pronounced, gradually closing the gender gap.

    In 1924, men athletes at about 3000, greatly least women, whose presence was minimal. By 1954, men participation had rise dramatically to over 4000, with women number rising steadily to few hundred. The display remained large in 1984, with over 5000 men and about 1500 women competing.

    The women participation, soared reaching rapidly almost at 5000, while men participants grew at a slower rate to just hit the peak at 6000 over the period. By contrast, the number of participants beginning over the 2000 in 1924 , with moderately increase it reached to almost upper 6000 in 1954. After that the number of participants barely increased and end the period at almost over the 10,000.

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      Olympic games → Olympic Games

      men athletes → male athletes

      2. Word Form / Selection

      display → displays

      men participation had rise → men’s participation had risen

      women participation → women’s participation

      specific year → specific years

      greatly least women → far fewer women

      almost upper 6000 → almost 6,000

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      In 1924, men athletes at about 3000, greatly least women, whose presence was minimal. → In 1924, male athletes were about 3,000, while women were minimal.

      Women participation, soared reaching rapidly almost at 5000… → Women’s participation soared rapidly to nearly 5,000…

      After that the number of participants barely increased and end the period… → After that, participants barely increased and ended the period at just over 10,000

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  2. Jannatul Fardaous Alif

    The bar chart and line graph demonstrate the number of male and female Olympic participants between 1924 and 2014 .

    Overall, in bar chart the highest number of male and female was in 2014 and the lowest was in 1924 , although , men outnumbered women in all years. Moreover, the line graph experienced an increase trend .

    In terms of bar chart, in 1924 the number of participants was lowest , which was 3000 for male and about 10 for female , on the other hand the number of male in 2014 was doubled in 2014 and it was 50 times higher for female . Female had a massive improvement from 10 to 5000 over the period.

    The line graph experienced slow increase for men , which was 2800 to more than 10,000 all over the years . From 1924 to 1984 , it was increasing slowly , which was 2800 to 6300 , however from 1984 to 2014 , it received a boost , which was 6,300 to more than 10,000.

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      bar chart and line graph demonstrate → The bar chart and line graph demonstrate

      increase trend → an increasing trend

      2. Word Form / Word Choice

      in bar chart the highest number of male and female was → in the bar chart, the highest numbers of males and females were

      although , men outnumbered women → although men outnumbered women (remove extra space)

      the number of male in 2014 was doubled in 2014 → the number of male participants in 2014 had doubled

      it was 50 times higher for female → it was 50 times higher for females

      Female had a massive improvement → Female participation increased massively

      it received a boost → it increased sharply

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      Overall, in bar chart the highest number of male and female was in 2014 and the lowest was in 1924 , although , men outnumbered women in all years. → Overall, the bar chart shows that the highest numbers of male and female participants were in 2014, and the lowest were in 1924, although men outnumbered women in all years.

      In terms of bar chart, in 1924 the number of participants was lowest , which was 3000 for male and about 10 for female , on the other hand the number of male in 2014 was doubled in 2014 and it was 50 times higher for female. → In the bar chart, the number of participants in 1924 was lowest: about 3,000 males and 10 females. By 2014, the number of males had doubled, while the number of females had increased fiftyfold.

      The line graph experienced slow increase for men , which was 2800 to more than 10,000 all over the years. → The line graph shows a slow increase for men, from 2,800 to more than 10,000 over the years.

      From 1924 to 1984 , it was increasing slowly , which was 2800 to 6300 , however from 1984 to 2014 , it received a boost , which was 6,300 to more than 10,000. → From 1924 to 1984, it increased slowly from 2,800 to 6,300; however, from 1984 to 2014, it rose sharply from 6,300 to over 10,000

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  3. Neajur Rahman Nasim

    The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female Olympics participants and the line graph shows total participants at the Olympics every 30 years between 1924 and 2014 in total and by gender.

    It is clear that, male had the highest proportion compared to others. On the other hand, women had the least Olympic participants. Moreover total participants increased dramatically between 1924 and 2014.In 2014 male and female Olympics participant had almost similar proportion.

    In terms of bar chart, male Olympics participants was 3000 in 1924, whereas women had least portion. In 2014 men and women Olympic participants increased dramatically. Moreover in 1984, male participants increased rapidly while female participants was almost stable. In 1954 male Olympic participants was approximately 4500,and female was almost 500.

    According to the line graph, from 1924 to 1954 total Olympics participants grew slowly. However in 1984, total participants increased rapidly. between 1984 and 2014 the total Olympics participants increased dramatically.

    1. In 2014 > pun

      Moreover in 1984 > Punc.

      while female participants was almost stable > SM

      rapidly while female> Pun

      . between 1984 > Capitalization

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  4. Nahidul Islam Shourov

    The bar chart illustrate the number of men and women participants in Olympic, and the line graph presents the total number of participants between 1924 and 2014.

    Overall, both male and female participants experienced a upward trend. However, the total number of participants increased stadely from beginning to end.

    In terms of 1924, men athletes recorded the year with highest proportion, which was 3000, while women was about only 100. By contrast the number of female athlete had the lowest portion in 1954 and 1984 with approximately 500 and 1900, whilst men led the both years in the meantime. However, in 2014 the year was dominated by male with just bellow 6000, meanwhile it was followed by female

    Moreover, the total number of participants was just below 4000 in the beginning, while it increased stabily between 1924 and 1984 and reached 7000. However, it experienced a dramatic rose from 7000 to above 1000

    1. illustrate > WF

      a upward trend > Article

      stadely > SP

      while women was about only 100 > SM

      By contrast > Punc

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  5. The bar and line graph show information about the number of male and female participants who took part in Olympic between 1924 and 2014 .

    It is clear the the number of male and female candidate entered the Olympic significantly from 1924 to 2024. By contrast, the amount of total candidates went up dramatically in the Olympic in the same year period.

    In 1924, 3000 male people arrayed in the Olympic, which increased significantly at reach by around 6000 in 2014. However there was increase at almost 5000 female, the number of female candidates entered in the Olympic went up dramatically from to 5000 in 2014.

    On the other hand, the number of total participants joined in the Olympic rose slightly from about 3000 in 1924 to just over 6000 in 1984, though from 1984 to 2014, the amount of participants rate increased dramatically to over 10000 from over 6000.

    1. The bar and line graph show information about the number of male and female participants who took part in Olympic between 1924 and 2014 . > Unclear

      It is clear the the number of male and female candidate entered the Olympic significantly from 1924 to 2024. > SM

      in the same year period. > WF

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      n 1924, 3000 male people arrayed in the Olympic, which increased significantly at reach by around 6000 in 2014. However there was increase at almost 5000 female, the number of female candidates entered in the Olympic went up dramatically from to 5000 in 2014. > SM and unclear

  6. The bar and line graph show information about the number of male and female participants who took part in Olympics from 1924 to 2014.

    Overall, the total number of participants increased significantly over the period, and also clear that the number of women joined grew faster than man.

    In 1924, only around 3000 men took part in the games, while the number of women was very small, almost zero. surprisingly man participants increased dramatically at reach by around 6000 in the end of the period. women on the other hand, began with a least number of participants and then rose significantly at close to 5000 in 2014.

    According to line graph, the total amount of participants rose steadily from about 3000 in the beginning of the time, and it remain similarity till in 1984, After that period this figure slightly rise from around 6000 in 1984 to more than 10000 in 2014.

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      olympics → Olympic Games
      man participants → male participants
      women joined → female participants
      the games → the Games
      surprisingly man → surprisingly, male

      2. Word Form / Selection

      increased dramatically at reach by → increased dramatically to reach
      began with a least number → began with the lowest number
      total amount of participants → total number of participants
      it remain similarity till in 1984 → it remained similar until 1984
      slightly rise → rose slightly
      close to 5000 → nearly 5,000
      the number of women was very small → the number of women was very low

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      The bar and line graph show information → The bar and line graphs show information
      Overall, the total number of participants increased significantly over the period, and also clear that → Overall, the total number of participants increased significantly over the period, and it is also clear that
      while the number of women was very small, almost zero. → while the number of women was extremely small, almost zero.
      surprisingly man participants increased dramatically at reach by around 6000 in the end of the period. → Surprisingly, male participation increased dramatically, reaching around 6,000 by the end of the period.
      women on the other hand, began with a least number of participants and then rose significantly at close to 5000 in 2014. → Women, on the other hand, began with the lowest number of participants and then rose significantly to nearly 5,000 in 2014.
      According to line graph, the total amount of participants rose steadily from about 3000 in the beginning of the time, and it remain similarity till in 1984, After that period this figure slightly rise from around 6000 in 1984 to more than 10000 in 2014. → According to the line graph, the total number of participants rose steadily from about 3,000 at the beginning, remained similar until 1984, and then rose slightly from around 6,000 in 1984 to more than 10,000 in 2014

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  7. The charts illustrates the number of participants at the male and female Olympic games every 30 years between 1924 and 2014 as well as total and by gender.

    Overall, there was a significant rise in total number of Olympic participants over the years, mainly due to the growing involvement of women, while man consistently outnumbered women in all years shown, the gender gap narrowed considerably by 2014.

    In 1924, the total number of athletes men about 3000, with the vast majority being man and only a small fraction women. By 1954, participants has increased to around 5000 of athletes, including roughly 4,500 and fewer than 1000 women.

    The number of competitors continued to climb in 1984, reaching about 7000. men participants grew moderately, while the number women rose significantly, accounting for nearly 1,500 participants. the most notable change occurred in 2014. When overall participation acceded 10,000 athletes, women’s involvement saw a dramatic increase, approaching of men, with approximately 4,800 women compared to around 6000 men.

    1. ChatGPT said:
      1. Spelling / Capitalization

      illustrates → illustrate
      male and female Olympic games → male and female participants in the Olympic Games
      man → men
      The most notable change occurred in 2014. When overall participation acceded → The most notable change occurred in 2014, when overall participation exceeded

      2. Word Form / Selection

      rise in total number → rise in the total number
      participants has increased → participants had increased
      of athletes → (remove “of”)
      roughly 4,500 and fewer than 1000 women → roughly 4,500 men and fewer than 1,000 women
      men participants → male participants
      the number women → the number of women
      approaching of men → approaching that of men

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      The charts illustrates → The charts illustrate
      while man consistently outnumbered women → while men consistently outnumbered women
      In 1924, the total number of athletes men about 3000 → In 1924, the total number of athletes was about 3,000 men
      with the vast majority being man → with the vast majority being men
      participants has increased to around 5000 of athletes → the number of participants had increased to around 5,000 athletes
      men participants grew moderately → male participation grew moderately
      the number women rose significantly → the number of women rose significantly
      The most notable change occurred in 2014. When overall participation acceded 10,000 athletes → The most notable change occurred in 2014, when overall participation exceeded 10,000 athletes
      approaching of men, with approximately 4,800 women compared to around 6000 men → approaching that of men, with approximately 4,800 women compared to around 6,000 men

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  8. Sumaiya Sabrin Prity

    The chart illustrates the number of Male and female participants in the Olympic games from 1924 to 2014 .As well as the total number of competitors over the same period.

    Overall ,Both of number the participators of man and women were steady rise in the total number of people, with women’s participation showing dramatic increased , especially after 1984 . Man consistently outnumbered women .Although the gender gap narrowed mostly by 2012.

    In 1924 the men participation was the highest proportion 3000 and the women participation was the lowest portion in that year .Similarly In 1954 same as previous year male was joined with Olympic on the other hand few number of female was joining in Olympic.

    In terms of between 1984 and 2014 the female number percentage was increased .their portion between almost 2000 and 5000 in those years. However, the male portion were 5500 and almost 6000.

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      Male and female → male and female
      Olympic games → Olympic Games
      .As well as → , as well as
      Overall ,Both → Overall, both
      Man → Men
      Although → although

      2. Word Form / Selection

      Both of number the participators → Both the numbers of participants
      steady rise → rose steadily
      dramatic increased → dramatic increase
      few number of female → a small number of females
      female number percentage → number of female participants
      male portion were → male portion was

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      The chart illustrates the number of Male and female participants in the Olympic games from 1924 to 2014 .As well as the total number of competitors over the same period. → The chart illustrates the number of male and female participants in the Olympic Games from 1924 to 2014, as well as the total number of competitors.

      Overall ,Both of number the participators of man and women were steady rise in the total number of people, with women’s participation showing dramatic increased , especially after 1984 . Man consistently outnumbered women .Although the gender gap narrowed mostly by 2012. → Overall, both men’s and women’s participation rose steadily, with a dramatic increase among women after 1984. Men consistently outnumbered women, although the gap narrowed by 2012.

      In 1924 the men participation was the highest proportion 3000 and the women participation was the lowest portion in that year .Similarly In 1954 same as previous year male was joined with Olympic on the other hand few number of female was joining in Olympic. → In 1924, men’s participation was about 3,000, while women’s was the lowest. In 1954, male participation stayed high, but only a small number of women joined.

      In terms of between 1984 and 2014 the female number percentage was increased .their portion between almost 2000 and 5000 in those years. However, the male portion were 5500 and almost 6000 → Between 1984 and 2014, the number of female participants rose from about 2,000 to nearly 5,000, while male participants increased slightly from 5,500 to around 6,000.

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  9. Mostofa Shadin Khan

    The bar chart illustrate the participants number of men and women between 1924 and 2014 in Olympics, and the line chart shows total number of participants.

    It is clear that, both gender had a upward trend in the meantime, whereas men were at top always till the end. Dramatically, total participants number was grown in every 30 years period.

    In terms of male participants, the number of male participants was increased almost 1500 from 1924 to 1954, while the number of female athlete had only a quite grown in that period. However, the total number of athletes was grew with a upward trend , where the number of total participants start from 3000 and reached from 1924 to 1954.

    In 1984, men athletes number was over 5000 in Olympics, while women athletes number was less then 3000 of men athletes. However, men and women had a quite difference in the year 2014 , where men was grew almost a thousand while women increased their number of athlete almost two times bigger. In the line chart, there was a dramatic increase of toi

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      illustrate → illustrates
      participants number → number of participants
      Olympics → the Olympics
      It is clear that, → It is clear that
      men were at top always → men were always on top
      Dramatically, total participants number → Dramatically, the total number of participants
      less then → less than
      toi → total participants

      2. Word Form / Selection

      a upward trend → an upward trend
      participants was increased → participants increased
      female athlete had only a quite grown → female athletes showed only a slight growth
      was grew → grew
      start from 3000 and reached from 1924 to 1954 → started at 3,000 and rose between 1924 and 1954
      men athletes number → number of male athletes
      women athletes number → number of female athletes
      men was grew → men grew
      two times bigger → twice as many

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      The bar chart illustrate → The bar chart illustrates
      both gender had a upward trend → both genders showed an upward trend
      the total number of athletes was grew → the total number of athletes grew
      while women increased their number of athlete → while women increased their number of athletes
      men and women had a quite difference → men and women had a noticeable difference

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  10. The bar chart and line graph detail the number of participants at the Olympics games from 1924 to 2014 by male and women.

    Overall, the participation from both the gender has increase over time. while woman particpition slowing a dramatic increase., epecially after 1984. Man consisdarity women , although thae gandar gap narround singnificiantly by 2012.

    in, the first bar chart, male participation was 3000 and female participation was below 1000 in 1924. In 1952, the male taking part in the olymipcs has\d linear increased and reached a numberof 45-000, where the female participation was still 1000. Following this the 1984, the contribition from male has increase above 5000and female contribition of the number 2000. male increase 2014 th number of 5000.

    By 2014 participition reched its highrst point ,

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      Olympics games → Olympic Games
      male and women → males and females
      woman particpition → women’s participation
      Man consisdarity women → Men consistently outnumbered women
      gandar gap narround singnificiantly → gender gap narrowed significantly
      olyimpcs → Olympics
      contribition → contribution
      participition → participation
      highrst → highest

      2. Word Form / Selection

      the participation from both the gender has increase → participation from both genders has increased
      slowing a dramatic increase → showing a dramatic increase
      linear increased → increased steadily
      numberof 45-000 → number of 4,500
      male increase 2014 th number of 5000 → male participation increased to about 6,000 in 2014
      reched its highrst point → reached its highest point

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      The bar chart and line graph detail the number of participants at the Olympics games from 1924 to 2014 by male and women. → The bar chart and line graph show the number of male and female participants in the Olympic Games from 1924 to 2014.
      while woman particpition slowing a dramatic increase → while women’s participation showed a dramatic increase
      in, the first bar chart, male participation was 3000 → In the first bar chart, male participation was about 3,000
      the male taking part in the olymipcs has\d linear increased → male participation in the Olympics increased steadily
      the contribition from male has increase above 5000and female contribition of the number 2000 → male participation rose above 5,000 and female participation reached about 2,000
      By 2014 participition reched its highrst point → By 2014, participation reached its highest point.

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  11. The chart demonstrate the number of male and female participants in the Olympic games from 1924 to 2014 , as well as the total number of competitors over the same period

    Overall, there was a steady rise in the total number of athletes , with women’s participation showing a dramatic increase , especially after 1984. Men consistently outnumbered women , although the gender gap narrowed significantly by 2014 .

    In 1924, around , 3000 men took part in the Olympics, compared with only a small number of women . By 1954, the number of male participation had risen to roughly 4,500 , while female participation had also increased slightly to about 500. During the following three decades , the upward trend continued . In 1984 , about 5,000 men and 1,500 women joined the games .

    By 2014, participation reached its highest point, with nearly 6,000 men 5,000 women , bringing the total number of athletes to over 10,000 . this indicates that women’s involvement grew rapidly and nearly equaled that of men in the modern era .

  12. The bar chart compare the number of participates at the Olympics and the line graph between every 30 years from 1924 to 2014 in total and by gender .

    It is clear that the number of male and female was highest participate in 2014,while lowest in 1924. However ,the total amount went up dramatically in the Olympic in the same year period .

    In terms of male was participate 5900 in 2014 ,which female was lowest respectively .Moreover there was was a increase at almost 5000 female ,the number of female candidates entered in the olympic went up dramatically fro

    1. The bar chart compare the number of participates at the Olympics and the line graph between every 30 years from 1924 to 2014 in total and by gender . > SM and WF

      It is clear that the number of male and female was highest participate in 2014,while lowest in 1924. However ,the total amount went up dramatically in the Olympic in the same year period . > SM

      In terms of male was participate 5900 in 2014 ,which female was lowest respectively .Moreover there was was a increase at almost 5000 female ,the number of female candidates entered in the olympic went up dramatically fro > SS and incomplete

  13. The bar chart illustrate the number of male and female olympic participants every 30 years from 1924 to 2014,and the line graph displays total participants between 1924 and 2014.

    Overall, there was a significant rise in total number of Olympic participants over the years, mainly dew to the growing involvement of women, while man consistently outumbered women in all years shown, the gender gap narrowed considerably by 2014.

    in 1924,the total number number of athletes men about 3000,with the vast majority being man and only a small fraction women.by 1954,participants increased to around 5000 of athletes, including roughly 4,500 and fewer then 1000 women.

    The number of competitors continued to climb in 1984,reaching about 7000.men participants grew moderately, while the number women rose significantly, accounting for nearly 1500 participants.the most noticable change occurred in 2014.when overall participants acceded 10000 athletes ,women involvement saw a dramatic increase, approaching of men, with approximetly 4800 women compared to around 6000 men.

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      illustrate → illustrates
      olympic → Olympic
      dew → due
      man → men
      outumbered → outnumbered
      in → In
      number number → number
      then → than
      noticable → noticeable
      acceded → reached
      approximetly → approximately

      2. Word Form / Selection

      the total number number of athletes men about 3000 → the total number of male athletes was about 3,000
      including roughly 4,500 and fewer then 1000 women → including roughly 4,500 men and fewer than 1,000 women
      men participants grew moderately → male participants grew moderately
      the number women rose significantly → the number of women rose significantly
      women involvement saw a dramatic increase → women’s involvement saw a dramatic increase
      approaching of men → approaching that of men

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  14. The charts provide information about the number of participants at the Olympics every 30 years between 1924 and 2014 in total by gender.

    Overall, the greatest number of participants was recorded in 2014, and male participants were always the highest in proportion over the years, as compared to the female players. The portion of total participants increased gradually between 1924 and 2014.

    According to the bar chart , the least number of female played in 1924, whereas the number of male participants was 3,000 , which was way ahead as compared to females. However, between 1924 and 1954, there was a noticeable increase in terms of the total participants, whilst it grew slightly in 1984. Moreover, the male participants again dominated Olympics in 1954 with the number of 4,000, which was around nine times greater than the female players.

    In 1984, men reserved the highest proportion as previous years, and the number also grew remarkably, whereas the number

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization
      Olympics → Olympic Games
      players → participants
      bar chart , → bar chart,
      Olympics → the Olympics

      2. Word Form / Selection
      female played → female participants
      portion of total participants increased → the total number of participants increased
      reserved the highest proportion → held the highest proportion

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making
      the least number of female played in 1924 → the least number of female participants was in 1924
      which was way ahead as compared to females → which was far higher than females
      it grew slightly in 1984 → it increased slightly by 1984
      male participants again dominated Olympics in 1954 → male participants again dominated the Olympics in 1954
      men reserved the highest proportion as previous years → men held the highest proportion, as in previous years
      the number also grew remarkably, whereas the number → the number also grew remarkably, while female participation remained low

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  15. The charts display data on the number of men and women participants at the Olympics every 30 years between1924 to 2014.

    Overall, men were more interested to participates over the while period, whereas womens athletes showed a dramatic increase, particularly after 1984.

    In 1924, around 3,000 men athletes in Olympics and only hundred women took a part on the Olympics. while 1954 male participates a smooth increase about 4,500, whereas female numbers are slightly increase about 500. In 1984, the total number of men exceeded 5,000 and women athletes reached about 1,500. The most significant change occurred in 2014, while male participates were 6,000 and female athletes had a significant grow about 5,000.

    However, in 1924 male and female the total number of participants around 3,000, while the total number of athletes grow continusly, from about 3,000 on 1924 to over 10,000 in 2014.

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization
      participates → participate
      womens → women
      on the Olympics → in the Olympics
      continusly → continuously

      2. Word Form / Selection
      men athletes → male athletes
      male participates → male participants
      female numbers are slightly increase → female numbers slightly increased
      had a significant grow → had significant growth

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making
      men were more interested to participates over the while period → men participated more throughout the period
      around 3,000 men athletes in Olympics and only hundred women took a part on the Olympics → around 3,000 male athletes participated, while only about 100 women took part in the Olympics
      while 1954 male participates a smooth increase about 4,500, whereas female numbers are slightly increase about 500 → By 1954, male participants increased smoothly to about 4,500, while female numbers rose slightly to around 500
      male participates were 6,000 and female athletes had a significant grow about 5,000 → male participants were 6,000 and female athletes increased significantly to about 5,000
      while the total number of athletes grow continusly, from about 3,000 on 1924 to over 10,000 in 2014 → the total number of athletes grew continuously from about 3,000 in 1924 to over 10,000 in 2014

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  16. The bar chart illustrates the figure of participants of male and female in Olympics and graph shows the total participants from 1924 to 2014.

    Overall, male was dominated throughout the years with huge digits except one year, though it was also leaded by male. On the other hand, in total participants it grew up steadily from starting, although there was little downward there in the middle.

    In terms of male and female participants, male was higher in every single year there was no compare between male and female, though female was quite similar in 2014 with 4800 participants, whereas male was 5900. Overall, male started with 3000 participants and ends with 5900, meanwhile, female started with 200 and finished with 4800, which was expeditious increase, compare to male.

    In total participants, the growth between 1924 and 2014 were huge and it was steadily increased from 3100 to 11300 throughout the years. Although, there was a small downward in 1984 but it grew up immediately, however the digits of participants were increased among the years.

    1. 1. Spelling / Capitalization

      Olympics → Olympic Games
      male was dominated → males dominated
      leaded → led
      there in the middle → in the middle
      compare → compared

      2. Word Form / Selection

      figure of participants → number of participants
      grew up steadily → grew steadily
      expeditious increase → rapid increase
      digits of participants → number of participants

      3. Sentence Structure / Sentence Making

      The bar chart illustrates the figure of participants of male and female in Olympics and graph shows the total participants from 1924 to 2014 → The bar chart illustrates the number of male and female participants in the Olympic Games, and the line graph shows the total participants from 1924 to 2014.

      male was dominated throughout the years with huge digits except one year → Males dominated throughout the years, except for one year.

      On the other hand, in total participants it grew up steadily from starting, although there was little downward there in the middle → Total participants grew steadily, though there was a slight dip in the middle.

      male was higher in every single year there was no compare between male and female → Male participants were higher every year, with no comparison needed.

      Overall, male started with 3000 participants and ends with 5900, meanwhile, female started with 200 and finished with 4800, which was expeditious increase, compare to male → Overall, males started with 3,000 and ended with 5,900 participants, while females started with 200 and rose to 4,800, a rapid increase compared to males.

      the growth between 1924 and 2014 were huge and it was steadily increased from 3100 to 11300 throughout the years → The total number of participants grew steadily from 3,100 in 1924 to 11,300 in 2014.

      there was a small downward in 1984 but it grew up immediately, however the digits of participants were increased among the years → There was a small dip in 1984, but numbers quickly rose again over the years.

      Band : 5.5

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