Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
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Countries should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Write at least 250 words.
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some people believe thet countries should be self-sufflcient in food produce and import as littie as possible. Others argue thet importing food is necessary for economic and practocal reasons.
Producing all food locally can make a country more self-reliant and reduce dependency on other nations. For example,during global crises or trade restrictions,countries thet rely on imports may face food shortages.Local food production aiso supports domestic farmers and boosts the economy by creating job.It can reduce transportation costs and environmental impact,since importing food from distant countries requires fuel and contributes to pollution.
However, producing all food domestically may not always be feasible or efficient . Some countries lack suitable climate or land to grow certain crope ,such as tropical fruits or wheat. Forcing lock production could increase food prices and reduce variety,affecting consumers.
In conciusion, while producing most food locally can increase self- sufficiency and benefit the economy
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BAND – 4.0
Every, country should try to produce all the food for the population as well as import little food as possible. I fully agree with this statement . I consider that every country should try their best to produce the amount of food those fulfil their population demand. Because import food from other country is very expensive. It will effect our finance. As well as it will also impact on our economy .
First of all, countries must be try to fulfil their populations rights. For fulfil the citizens food demand , the government should take some step. Firstly, they should stop the soil pollution. Because polluted soil affect the agricultural directly. It reduce the number of farming. Secondly, government should launch many modern instrument for farming and learn the farmer how to use these. As a result, the farmer will able to farm more products by using modern tools. All of these steps help the authority to increase the amount of food. For an example, in China , the government apply this steps in their country and they got a great result. They able to produce all kinds of food in their country.
However, import food from other country is very expensive. For importing food, we should pay a big amount of money which is directly affect our finance. If we able to produce all kinds of food in our country, we would not import a little bit food from in other country. On the other hand, importing food is not that much nutritious. By importing food, our economy will decrease day by day. For an example, in Nepal, all kinds of food are not produced their. So, they import many food from other country to fulfil their citizens demand. As a result, they should pay a big amount of money. For this reason , they are lag behind from other country. Moreover, sometimes we need to import some food for tourist. Because every year, many visitors are come in our country to visit many beautiful place. That’s why to provide them food as their wish we need to import some food from many country such as Thai food, Italian food, Chinese food etc.
To sum up, I believe that we should try to produce all kinds of food in our country. Besides, we also need some import food for our visitors. In addition, importing food is crucial but in limit. But, we also have the ability of farming all kinds of food.
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BAND – 5.5
All the food should be produced for the population in some countries, whereas only sufficient amount import from world wide. It is believed by many individuals that government should little bit meals contributed our local economy. In my perspective, I agree with this statement and will prove my stand with logical explanation in the subsequent paragraphs because foreign countries always provided some food another destination and income more foreign currency but some country do not produce more meals for locality.
First and forest, some individuals do not work regularly for producing food. The main reason is that, large number people do not create a jobs any companies. For instance, they does not know how to produce food and daily needed goods. Moreover, all the people need food for lives, so authority should take produce more food for them.
On the other hand, many individuals think that import little food this contribute countries economy. However, this process badly effect developing countries economy and destroyed strong producing meals sector. For example, a local university survey shows that when any countries import food from in the whole world countries they approximately 20% economy go down their economy at that time and break there powerful economic system. Therefore, all countries should more meals produce there own area and do not come more food from other countries. As a result, this country represent that time world wide and they contributed their economic method.
To sum up, I totally agree this notion because when import food another countries, they were create a better friendship and help each others difficult situation. Hence, our administration should produce more food in our country.
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BAND – 4.5
All the food should be produce for the population only in some countries, whereas only sufficient amount import from world wide. It is believed by many individuals that government should little bit meals contributed in our government food. They can supply food in low cost to our general people. In my opinion I’m agree with that, Countries should try to produce all the food for the population.
First of all, the main reason is there are less food aveiele than need. So government should need to import food from other county. For example, our country has a large number of people compare to land. As well as we need more food than produce. When can not import food from other country, it become a big problem to our nation. Low stander people can not buy because their income is too low. And day by day it price increase. In future it will be become most expensive thing. That’s why our government should import food from other country.
However, It will be make our friendship to the other country . Because when you import food from other country. it makes a good friendship to other country. It is very helpful to our nation. But the most important things is that our countries people did not sleep without eat. So country must be import food from world wide.
To sum up, we can easily say that it better for our nation also government. If they supply food to us, our government produce food to us. It will help them more than any different ways that is reasons why i’m fully agree with that.
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BAND – 4.0
The countries should produce the food only for the population and very little amount of food should be imported from other countries. I firmly believe with this statement, however, many other unnecessary problems may occur if one country only produces food for its own people.
Firstly, one country should fulfil their population’s need properly.Food is a necessary element for one’s living. In a country there are good number of people living, who needs to consume food to grow, work and live their life. A country should provide the the food the people need for living. For example, this year Mexico produced food as much their population needed. It is also beneficial for the country’s economy and finance. Moreover, the people will be connected to their roots and their culture through the food of their country.
However, a country should also focus on how much food the citizens need. Because not all people consume the same amount of food. Besides, if the country only produces food for the citizens only, the tourism community will face a problem. There won’t be any kind of food available for them. As a result, the counties popularity may also decrease, which is not so good for a country, because tourism has a big impact on a county’s economy. In that case importing food can be a great solution. the country will be able to fulfil their own people’s necessaries as well as the people who are tourist.
In conclusion, a country should produce the food according to the citizens need but also focus on the people’s appetite and the people who are visiting the country.
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BAND – 5.5
Currently, many nations ought to produce all the food for the population only while many prefer import little food as possible. Though this statement has some benefits still I completely disagree with this statement because it is not possible to produce all kind of food and if it is needed more food the country have to import food from another country.
One main reason is, it is not possible to produce all kind of food in a country because there are so many nation which have less farm land then others country. So that they cannot produce as much food as needed. Moreover, many country has large population so that they need enough food .In this situation the government have to import food from foreign country. For example, in China 2023 80 million food such as corn, rice, and meet import from Africa for its large population.
However, there is a arguement about import food from another nation because people think that if any country import food from a foreign it would be effect their economy .furthermore, many critics thought that import food from another country is expensive rather then produce it in own country. Some country charge a large amount of text for it. Thus the reason they discourage importing food and prefer if it needed they have some limitation for it. And try to produce basic food items in their country and at this matter they can take help from technology.
In conclusion, despite many country prefer produce all kind of food in their country while others thought import food is expensive so they have to import food as much as little .I believed that it would be beneficial for a country import food as they needed as well as try to produce much food in their country.
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BAND – 5.5
Nowadays, countries all over the world ought to produce all the food for the countries people and import as small amount of food as possible. In my opinion I think that counties should produce more food in their own nation instead of import from another country, but imported food also plays an important role in a countries economic development.
On the one hand, every nations should produce their homegrown food, which can help their economic development as well as they can able to fulfill the peoples demand. For example, people can easily earn by selling homegrown food but also it can help the people who are seeking for job. A survey carried out that in INDIA most of the ASIAN people are dependent on their agriculture and every year they earn a lot of money by selling homegrown food.
On the other hand, imported food is also a part of a countries economic development because all source of food cannot produce in a nation so that they have to import food from another country. Firstly individuals have a several choice as well as they also wants o try different kinds of food. For example, nowadays people are addicted to Ramen and in Bangladesh there hard to find these kind of noodles so they have to import food from Korea. However, it is essential for a country to import a amount of food so they can increase their economical balance.
In conclusion, although it is important to import food from another nation. But people should increase their homegrown food production because it can help o balance ones economic development.
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BAND – 5.5
Nowadays, most of the individuals believe that countries ought to produce all the food according to their need and import as less food as possible. I disagree with the statement, because according to my opinion, if we import less food from abroad, it will reduce global trade and as a result the model of globalization would hamper. Beside, as less food we import as much we have to produce and if country’s economy is not well and if the land in not well capable to produce food, it will create a food crisis.
One of the main reasons why I disagree with the statement is that if we just cultivate food as we need , it will reduce export ratio. As a result country GDP will face a downward trend. Again country’s bonding with there close country also be harsh. Further, in order to produce more food, government as well as company’s create more job opportunity. But because of less producing of food their create a job crisis even most of the youth become unemployed. Furthermore, as less country import food from abroad as much it impact on global trade. As a result the model of globalization will fail.
Again, according to some expert, if country import less food , they have to produce more food to fulfill there demand. But unfortunately most of the country are not capable to do this. Country’s has some barriers such as crisis of fund, less field, crisis of producing method as well as crisis of instrument. Again a survey, run by Denmark, shows that a Latin American country with less land focused to produce all food for the population and try to reduce import ratio. But they can not be successful. Even they face some major problem such as GDP down, less global trading, food crisis and so on.
To conclude, producing all food for population is not a successful way. Actually witch country try to do this face a great scale of problem. That is why experts discourage produce all food for population than import as little as possible. Experts suggest country ought to balance the ration of production and import. Hence, I disagree with the statement and do not suggest to produce all food for population and import as little food as possible.
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BAND – 5.5
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BAND – 5.0
Some people think a county should produce all the food that its people need and import as little food as possible. I partly agree with this idea.
On one hand, producing food inside the country has some good points. First its makes the country safer . If there is a war , natural disaster, or global problem, the country will still have enough food for its people. also local food is usually fresher and may be healthier. It can also give jobs to farmers, worker, people in food factories. this helps the country’s economy because more people are working and earning money.
On the other hand, it is not possible for every country to grow all kinds of food. Some countries are too cold, too hot, or do not have enough water or land. For example, some countries cannot grow rice, wheat, or fruit well. If they try to grow everything themselves, it may cost too much money and time. also importing food from other countries give people more choices. They can enjoy different fruits, vegetable and other products they do not grow in there own country. Trade between countries can also create good relationship and help economy grow.
In conclusion, I believe countries should try to produce some important foods, like rice, wheat, and vegetable to product themselves. However they should still import food that they cannot produce easily. A mix of both local production and imports is the best choice. so I extend agree with in this opinion.
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BAND – 6.0+
Some people think that they should produce all the food that is individuals need .While other’s believe that when needs produce they imports other countries to produce everything. I partially agree with this idea.
On the one hand, some countries do not have enough land, water , or suitable climate change to grow all types of food .For example, cold countries cannot grow tropical fruits like mango ,banana, trying to produce all food locally may make it expensive and reduce availability .
On the other hand, importing food people to eat a variety of food all year. It gives people better nutrition and more choice in meals. Importing food always good quality as well as it helps stay body active. Importing trade with other countries also helps the their economy because countries can sell what they produce a lot and buy what they need. Another point is that trade in food maintain good international relationship both countries. They know to each other product quality .For example, in India where their any product reduce such as clothes, onion and so on. At that time, they import these product serve the people need and other responsibilities.
In conclusion, countries should try to grow import food locally, but importing some food is necessary for variety ,nutrition , and economic reasons.
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BAND – 5.0
All the food should produce the population my countris.some one believe that countris should be proudis the importent little food.I agree this countris should try to produce all the food for the population because if my countri ar very poor ,its a importent food my country.other argue that importent food is necessary for economic and prectial reasons.This food are produce in my counteis,help the poor people,and children .
On the other hand, population are most incoreaside my country.I agree this country are importent person the poor people,little food as possible I agree this people help the rich man ,for example the poor people them the fast time food produce should be try this life .They are very happy this life fast time try food are injoyabel,they produce are food tradisonal food is try this life .
However, peoducing all food demesticaly my not allowes be fasibale or efficient .some countris lack suitable climate or lend to grow certinh cropy ,such as topical fulits or whet. Is the most importent my country,. this food are common person in my country. This country is very effactive my people place .it the modst importent its my poor people .i velive this my countey side ar common proudius person this country.
In conclusion , this countey should try to produce all the food for tey this my country .i think my count thid tradisonal food are very happy this moment .approach, while this my country .produce
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BAND – 3.0
ASK FOR FEEDBACK
Every countries should try to produce all the food for the population and import as little food as possible. I think , countries should try to produce all the food for the population because its important for a country to give all the citizen proper food for live. However , import food is important if the country have not enough food to supply.
One should get good portion of food for their own. It is a country responsibility to produce food for the population , which may fulfil people demand . If the countries people could not get enough food , it would be the Government responsible .To produce enough food portion for the people government should take some step such as , digital agriculture system can improve the farming for more crops. Also , Learning digital methods can help farmer to grow more crops. For example, In China, we can see that their farming methods increase the level of farming. They produce large portion of food to their citizen . so, applying the digital methods help the country to grow more food and also help to produce more food for the citizen.
However, growing more food can fulfil the demands of countries citizen also it helps to export food for country economical rise. If a country import little food , it not only shameful for the country but also decrease their financial growth. For a country, economical increase is must to stand their position in worldwide. Moreover, it helps to introduce themselves in worldwide. Therefore , it is essential for a country to export some food so they can increase their economical balance.
In conclusion, although it is important to grow more food for the countries population because it is important to give enough food for all the citizen . Also , growing more food can help a country to stand up. I think growing more food can help to export food in worldwide . Therefore , I believe countries should grow their own food rather than import food .
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BAND – 5.5+
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