Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Write at least 250 words.
Remaining Time:
WT-2, 1/11/2025, Premium 142
Word Count: 0
Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing.
Is this a positive or negative development?
Write at least 250 words.
Word Count: 0
Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. I believe, it is a negative development for countryside, but it has also a positive development for individuals better life.
Many people lives in countryside from by born. But there are not any developed educational institute or organization for seeking job. So, for education and career opportunity rural people moved to lead life in urban areas. Urban area carry lots of facilities for individuals, that is the reason majority people thinks to lives in urban areas. Nowadays, majority parents are moving in urban areas for their children’s education. they admit their children in English medium school and also they find better job in any kind of companies and institute., also many peoples take business adventures, there are various types of business ideas , they do and lead life gradually, but they have to face lots of problem in urban areas, such as unhealthy lifestyle, unhealthy food and pollution. This make urban areas life critical and cause of many disease.
In countryside leading life is easy and relaxing in natural environment. Some of people also move from urban area to rural area, cause of granary, relaxing environment and also the food is fresh, safe from chemical, fresh fish from pond and many other healthy atmosphere. Many old citizens who lived in urban areas they choose countryside after their retirement to enjoy nature and lead healthy life in rest of the life. Countryside has lots of facility by its natural atmosphere. Their land take farmer for crops harvest, and give them half crops . There are many ways to earn money. So individuals should not leave permanently rural areas, they can do success in life in many ways from there.
In conclusion, populations in the countryside are decreasing is a negative side, but also for people’s better career opportunity its a positive side and need more improvements.
#maintain both bodies if you give both side approach
#work on idea development
#Many people lives – Many people live
#from by born – from birth
#But there are not any – But there are no
#So, for education and career opportunity rural people moved to lead life in urban areas – So, for education and career opportunities(,) rural people move to urban areas
#majority parents are moving in urban areas – majority of the parents are moving to urban areas
#also many peoples take business adventures, there are various types of business ideas , they do and lead life gradually – unclear
#body 2 – seems very confusing
#its a positive side – it is also positive
#need more improvements – unclear
BAND – 4.5
In recent time, cities and urban areas are more modernized than rural part of any region. For that reason, people are tend to move in cities, whilst the number of people in countryside decreasing gradually. Though there are lots of amenities are increasing in town area, countryside area are more peaceful and low polluted than rural part.
On the one hand, it is true that modern technology are modified and we live in a era of modern civilization. In cities and urban area have the more facilities and improve dramatically which appeal to shift people to lead a lavish lifestyle. In recent decades, 85% people shifted in several cities and developed in concern of carrier opportunity. As people are now carrier oriented and like to lead a lavished life so they tend to move as cities provide them facilities and carrier opportunity. Additionally, nowadays most of the people like to have a nuclear family with modernized amenities so they choose developed area for better lifestyle.
On the other hand, Countryside area is a huge part of any region, where most of the community build up and their upbringing place are there. Though there are lack of carrier opportunities, lots of technology, few facilities those remote area demonstrate our root of life. The village area are peaceful and not polluted which is really good for all. Because of modern carrier people tend to leave those place. In recent study, only few aged people and some children were found in a village of India, which effect a bad impact for upcoming days. There is no one to take care of them.
To conclude, its true that, carrier is crucial for all but its not right to move cities for permanently. Beside this, our govt should take some steps to improve and modernized the countryside part and develop them in a proper way.
#clear your opinion in introduction
#people are tend to – people tend to
#countryside area are more peaceful and low polluted than rural part – unclear as both are same aspects
#In cities and urban area have – cities and urban area has
#developed in concern of carrier opportunity – unclear
#lavished life – luxurious life
#Because of modern carrier people tend to leave those place – that is why modern people who focuses on career tend to leave those places
#body 2 – seems little confusing due to no clear statement in introduction
BAND – 6.0
Nowdays,many people from village are moving to big cities for better life and good opportunities. Because of this the number of people living in the country sides is going down. In my opinion this situation has good sides and bad sides.
On the positive side when people moving to cities,they can go more facilities such as education,health care, and better jobs in the cities. They are more school and hospitals, so people improving standard. For Example young person from small village, can study for a good university in the city and got a high playing job later. This helps are people to have a brighter future.
On the other hand, there are also some negative effects, when to many people move to cities, it crates many problem like traffic jam, air pollution and living high costs, Cities become and its find a high level to find a place. on the other hand the rural areas become empty, therr are not enough workers, this can effect are the people food production and village development. It which encures to lead faster lives.
In conclusion,Moving from rural urban areas has both advantages and disadvantages. while it helps people have good opportunities, it also creates for village of serious problem. It can life harder and easy many ways.
#underlength
#work on spaces capitalization and punctuation
#work on ‘because’ sentence structure
#sever sentence making error
#when people moving to cities – when people move to cities
#go more facilities – access more facilities
#so people improving standard – so people improve their standard of living
#high playing – high-paying
#This helps are people – This helps people
#when to many people – when too many people
#it crates – it creates
#Cities become and its find a high level to find a place – unclear
BAND – 4.5
Nowadays, people are becoming more concern to lead a develop life with urban planning, which rural areas population are being declined. Although it causes negative impacts on cities, i believe, this changes have made positive development in individuals lives.
Having moved in cities, people have faced challenges to protect them from air pollution. In cities, people are living in apaprtmrnt, flats due to limitations of places. Consequently, without proper planning when individuals move in urban area, population of towns rapidly growth. As a concequence, peopel lead to their in various slums that hapend epidemics. According to a recent survey showed, almost 45% people died in cities despite covid-19 in Bangladesh. In addition, citites enviroment are becoming deleterious due to knocking down some trees, parks and so on resulting in increasing global warming.
However, people lives have changed susbstantially in order to urbanization. To illustrate, people get facilities to earn money because of connecting with job sectors. As the technological development opens more opportunities for communities, moving on cities help people to grab it, which ensures to lead faster lives. Moreover, countries topnotch institutions are located in capital, which offers quality education. So, parents are keen to take admission for their children in reputatative institution because of facing competiton in modern world.
In conclusion, leaving coutryside represents negative barriers for city dewellers, it creates positive development for countries thrive economy and quality education. Therefore, I believe that moving cities is a positive development rather than negative ones.
In the world nowadays village people are moving to town and urban areas, so day by day it is decline the populations in the countryside. I believe, it is a negative development as it create generation gap in the cities and make many environment problem, but there are also some positive impacts which cannot be ignored.
On the one hand, most of the people goes the cities earn more and more money and enjoy facilities. But it a negative effect on city. there are many reason. Firstly, more and more people attend together so they live very small place and it so bad effect all people. Secondly, if together more people they create more wastage and it is to much bed effect in environment, According to a resent survey, in India Bombe is the most population area, while in winter this is a higher pollution in that.
On the other hand, it have some positive development. For example many rural student went to the cities and learn many things. Because cities have more facility on education, big hospitals, transport, and part time jobs for students. So, many student learning and earning is gone their and they know how to live a good live and stay a good society. For instance, my sister live a big city last 4 years. Her life style is totally change on village girls. Her speaking style is so pretty and learn many things.
In conclusion, many people moving in capital it is so bad effect in countryside, while some time it is good for rural people. I think, it is negative effect on urban. So it take maintain all human.
There is a significant growing rate of rural to urban area migration across the globe, reducing population in the countryside. I believe this is complete negative progress for upcoming future.
First and foremost, the impact is that it diminishes the level of life quality in big cities. Since many towns are constructed to meet the limited requirements of their citizens, such as accommodation capacity, transportation systems, and educational systems, the increasing population leads to a destruction of the balance between supply and demand. Furthermore, when countrysides become quiet, the rate of crime increases because of a lack of security monitoring; also, governments prefer to allocate funds to more crowded areas. Moreover, a decreasing chance of development in rural areas is another outcome. For example, countrysides in Iran that impose migration on their people have not made any significant progress in the last decades, since most of the residents consist of seniors who don’t need to move with a fast-paced lifestyle.
On the positive side, the migration of rural people to cities brings about a great opportunity for them in terms of jobs. Many prestigious companies are located in cities, and talented and qualified persons who lived in rural districts before can apply for new positions and increase their lifestyle. In addition, better medical services are provided in cities, which individuals in urgent situations have convenient access. Unfortunately, many people who live outside of cities lose their lives quickly because of inaccessibility to hospitals.
In consciously,
All over the world, it is becoming a common trend that countryside people are shifting to cities and urban areas, and by this, population in the rural area has been decreasing. And this trend has both good and bad effects because in one way it improving people’s lifestyle, however, it is also causing some problems such as overpopulation in cities.
On the one hand, there are various positive developments would occur by the shifting of people in cities. Firstly, the economy of the city is rising, by which many modern and necessary infrastructures have been constructed. Following that people are enjoying a comfortable life style, and also there is lot of advanced hospitals, reputed university’s which is benefiting the residents. So that people are taking advanced medical treatment, and the children’s are getting a quality education. One survey in America has showed that the people who live in cities live longer then the people who live in villages, and the gap of percentage is huge.
On the other hand, this movement of people has some bad impacts on cities, and it is very concerning. The main problem it is causing is that crime rate is going sky rocket, which has affecting the people very badly. Another thing is happening that there is not sufficient people in rural areas to grow foods, as a result food shortage has been seen in cities. And that’s why people are getting lots of health problems, however, many of them also dying.
In conclusion, coming to cities are not a good development, but many people are not aware of it.
In the word present days, rural people are moving to town and urban areas. Although it is day by day populations in the countryside are decresing, I believe it is created positive devolopment because people moving to urban areas for improve their life.
On the one hand, it has a some negetive effect. When people’s moving urban areas, this areas people’s day by day increasing. For a result created population and increasing traffic jam. Moreover, people’s faced challange to ptotect their air pollution and environment. Cities people’s are living in aprtment, flats due to limitation for this place, when some individual moving this place without proper planning this time created place problem, groth population and global warming. So, this time people’s survive are very difficult.
On the other hand, I believe it has some essential benefits. People’s moving to cities for change their life. Cities life are very devolopment. It has a better opportunity such as help to get good job. furthermore, it has a good facilities for study. In cities Technological devolopment opens more opportunities. For example, in 2025 cities college students get good result than rural areas. So, cities study technic are very devolpment. When rural people’s moving cities areas, I believe, day by day grwth our study.
In conclusion, althouth when rural people are moving to cities it has created some problem but i believe it creates study devolopment and opportunities to get job for unemployment people’s. Cities countries has top instrituction and different top company so it is helful for poor peoples.
In recent time around the world, rural people choose to move in cities and urban areas. For this reason, the countryside populations are decreasing day by day. In my opinion, there are several reasons for this trend, and it has both positive and negative sides.
The first reason that cities offer more job opportunities. People can find better and higher paying job there. However, the second reason is people education and medical services in cities are much better than in villages. Many parents want their children to study in good schools and get proper treatment, so they move to towns. In my opinion , city life is more comfortable, with better roads, shops, and modern facilities.
On the other hand, it also have many negative sides because cities became over crowded. There are lost of traffic jams and pollutions of their over populations. In contrast, in villages people lose their young worker and our farming decreased day by day. Moreover, our villages economy went down
Around the world, people are moving to cities and urban areas,, by this, the number of people live in countryside is decreasing. In my opinion, this trend has both positive and negative impact on development.
On the one hand, moving to city to get better life, better education, job facilities, healthcare and more salary. There are not much factories or good hospitals in the countryside. So, they can lead a comfortable lifestyle. Also, people in cities can enjoy modern facilities like transportation, shopping malls, entertainment places. After all, moving to city can change their standard of living.
On the other hand, too many population moving to city can cause various problems. It will increase the noise and pollution. It can also increase crime which is concerning. In the countryside, there are not much farmers available to grow food. So it prevent the increasing price. The rural areas become lonely cause their children are moving to the city. Day by day it will create a great impact on the upcoming generation.
In conclusion, there are both good and bad impacts. It helps people to get a good form of life and also hampers for the city people. Both city and rural area living people will witness a great impact on their upcoming generation.