Some believe secondary students should learn international news as a subject at school, while others think it’s a waste of time.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
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Some people consider secondary learner should learn global news as a subject in school. while others people say it is a kill of time. In my opinion, I believe that student should read global news as a subject in school.
On the one hand, learner read the global news they have many think about. Firstly, they know what happen in the world, which they do not do out of country. Secondly, they have know politics, religion, cultural on other countries, and language. For example, English is a international language, when they learn the international news, they understand others countries people what do say. Moreover, student know many other things, like what sports organized which country, what win the trophy, so on. So, it is add by academic study and learn more effectively.
On the other hand, others people say it is kill time. their have many reason. Firstly, most of the student’s have academic pressure, if adding another subject they goes to stress. For instance, many student learn per day 1-2 hours one subject, they complete all subject pass the all day, when they do not read the extra subject. Secondly, if their force learn this subject, while they just read for marks, not learn useful. According a study from United Kingdom University, most of the student learn the international news on their free time.
In conclusion, I think secondary learner should learn this subject ways it is good their learning, while it is choose by many student learn their leisure time and it is useful.
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BAND – 5.0
It is people believe secondary students should learn international news as a subject at school. International subject is a very important. This subject is new learning system. Other country this subject better learning system.
On the hand, the secondary students learn international new as a subject at school, while it is very develop students. Because it is opining new job, but longer time study. This subject develop every country.
On the other hand, other people think secondary students should learn international new as a subject at school waste of time. Because big cost invest and longer time study. Other people thing no future this subject. In example, Many poor people enough money get an their children not admit to school.
Secondary student should learn international news as a subject at school and lowest fee admission in school. Then other people not thing it’s a waste of time.
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BAND – 4.0
Some people consider that secondary students should learn international news as a subject at school, on the other hand some people think it is a waste pf time. In my opinion, students should learn international news as a subject at school beacuse it increase their knowladge and learn many things like others countries people, culture.
On the one hand, Some people believe secondary students do not should learn international news as a subject at school. Their think students have a lot of subject in study. Their do not needed learn extra subject. When students read news they do not focus on their academic subject. Moreover, many students dislike reading news so, when you forsing this subject their can’t study this and loss their focus and academic study skill.
On the other hand, some individual and me believe secondary students should learn international news as a subject at school. Because, when students reading outside books their will increase knowladge. Their knowing about others countries people, their culture, and differens history. their believes study not only for exam marks but also needed for increse knowladge. Furthermore, when students reading news their know about others countries work demand and facilities and how sefety live in this countries people. For example, the American students always read outside countries news and they know a lot of history different countries, for a results there are around 80% people educated.
In conclusion, although others people think international news as subject at school it is waste of time. I stongly believe, it has a lot of benefits for students such as information others countries history, how get a opporcunites and job.
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BAND – 5.5
It is thought by the people believed higher school students should learn international news as a subject at school, while others think that it loss of time. In my opinion, I believe that, higher school should be most necessary to known the news.
On the hand, as a student as far as many news or article different language we knew it. most of time we likes videos or movies as we know the different news . for example, English is an international language . as we like Spanish, Italian or so many Language we visit many countries or connected to travel whole over the world. for the students or Viziter to know about language skills that connected to the whole world . we know, the subject or many foreign news papers as we learn. for examples, Laptop or mobile searched the different English articles to follow the writers. the very famous poet are write different
on the other hand, others think that its a waste of time. there are many particular reasons behind it. Firstly, many poor people do not get enough money to get an their children to admit their children to goes to the school. secondly, many guardians think that only passed the exam is the main theme. so, they did not understand so much. Finally, we should must me sincere about this subject.
IN conclusion, I think secondary learner should learn this subject is the good as a students. so, they must learn this subject.
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BAND – 4.5
Some people consider secondary learner global news as a subject in school. It is thought that by the people believe higher school students should learn international news a subject a school, while others think that it time. In my opinion I believe that , higher school should be must neseccary to known the news.
One the one hand some people believe that secondary students most should learn international news as a subject at school,they know what happen in the world,which they do not to do out of country. For example English is international language, as we like Spanish,Italian are so many language, we visit many countries or connected to travel whole over the world. For the students visit to know about language skill connected the whole world.
On the other hand, others people it is kill time their have many reason. Firstly, most of the students have academic pressure,if adding another subject they goes to stress. Firstly,many poor people do not get enough money to get an their children to admit their children to goes to school. Secondly many guardians thinks that only passed to the exam main theme. So, they didn’t understand so much. For example Americans students always read outside countries news and they know a lot of history. For a result there 80% students educated.
In conclusion think secondary learner should learn this subject is the good a students.
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#In conclusion think secondary learner should learn this subject is the good a students – In conclusion, I think secondary learners should study this subject as it is good for students
BAND – 5.5
Some believe secondary students should learn international news as a subject at school, while others think it’s waste of time. I think it’s helpful cause it can help us to get updated and knowing that what is happening around the world.
On the one hand, some people think that students should learn international news cause its vey effective. For example, when someone learn international news like podcast, newspaper it boosts his knowledge and also helpful for their upcoming daily life. For that in my opinion, I think everyone should learn it and the government should take action for this. He can also learn about the politics and good cautery of a country.
On the other hand, other people think it’s just waste of time. For entrance when a student not like political or something in my opinion its very hard to study for him and it can’t help their in study. Learn international news as a school subject I think its a little bit waste of time for those student who aren’t interested in politics or something. There are so many thing available on the daily news without political purpose. They should know those updates for adjusting with the daily world. If you don’t want to learn that as a school subject i prefer you can learn these beside your school subjects.
In conclusion, if a student learn international news he always a step far from his friends or classmates who didn’t value this. It’s a better way to learn international news as a school subject, So the government should take steps about it so that everyone will learn it seriously.
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BAND – 5.5
Some individuals think secondary students should learning international news as a subject at school and other think it’s waste of time. In my opinion learning international news as a subject at school.
On the one hand, learning international language is very effective. It should be help learn new whole world. Students know different countries news, culture, rules or other activities. It boost their knowledge. they learn different languages. It help to learn their political system. They learn news different news channel, For example, BBC international news.
On the other hand, some people think international news is waste of time. They think it’s not perfect for the student because they think it can not to help learn anything.
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BAND – 3.5
Nowadays, people are concern about news from international sector because of increase their knowledge. Majority of people think that, its crucial for their children so that secondary level students should learn international news as a subject at school, whereas some people opined its just waste of time.
On the one hand, in todays civilized world all sorts of news are important for everyone. In terms of students, have knowledge about international sector are necessary because, they attempted several quiz, debate from school level so, they have to attend those competition and should have knowledge about international news. For instance, a journal was published few days ago, their it was mentioned that, todays young generation depict interest in outdoor activities and perform several quiz section in United kingdom. However, gain knowledge in various part beside study provide a positive sign for upcoming generation. Additionally, after completing academic study most of the students try in job sector where they have to enrolled for competitive exams whilst, its necessary to have knowledge about international news. In that case, if students have a subject at their school level it would be easier for them in their upcoming exam.
On the other hand, students nowadays have extra pressure for their academic sector, beside this they have to attend several activities and project as a result they obtained less marks in their exam. Furthermore, general knowledge are important in many parts of their education level but its not necessary to explore this deeply at an early stage of study. According to Daily News, 80% students are in depressed because of extra activities and project in school as a result they cannot explore their academic study and gradually their result in academic subject reduced day by day.
To conclude, its true that international news are necessary for students in many part of their education but its not mandatory for secondary level students. International studies can be added as a optional subject at school how that they can explore this according to their interest.
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BAND – 6.0
This is ongoing consider about secondary students should learn international news as a subject at school, while others believe this idea is waste of time.
On the one hand, News related subject important for all student because he/she can enhanced knowledge from this subject. They can know all about international news from one subject. For instance, Math, Science, Physics, Chemistry and many other subject is important for all secondary student. But, they cannot learn about international news from any subject. When the subject is added to subject of secondary student,, it can sharpen knowledge to any secondary level student. Students can learn international language to communicate world wide. It also important for co curricular activities in secondary level students. They also excited to do physical activities, playing sports, participate to any competition etc.
On the other hand, when a student from secondary level they are enough mature and capable to do any critical diseion. So, they can take pressure to extra subject. A news related subject help the student to creative thinking, productivity, and ability. Firstly, a student also focused in his main subject they cannot read regularly a news related subject. When a student read it regularly they also learn foreign culture , boost there memory to enough thinking. Others thinking that, it is waste of time, students cannot read it regularly.
In conclusion, there are many subject for secondary level of student. but in my opinion international news as a subject brings a lot of benefits for secondary school students.
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BAND – 5.0
It is thought by some people that international news might be added as a subject in secondary school to increase knowledge and resources of the students, while others believe this idea is totally waste of time and this subject can hamper on other studies.
On the one hand, although school should be added news related subjects, but there are some other important subjects which can enhanced knowledge of a student. For instance, Science, Mathematics and English would be the major subject of every secondary school, by studying these subject they learned about many critical things. As a result, they can acquired some valuable things, such as gather knowledge from science , increases thinking ability and problem solving from mathematics, learn international language to communicate world widely, get resources either about earth or out of the world. Beside that, students should be encouraged for extra curriculum activities, for example, physical activities, playing sports, participating in quiz and these types of activities.
On the other hand, students from secondary school are enough mature and capable to consume critical things. So it is better to add an extra subject to enhanced their ability, productivity, thinking ability. There are numerous benefit to read newspaper regularly. The first and foremost benefit is, students can informed about the world, what happening in the world, and current matters. Not only they informed about international matters, but also students can learn about foreign culture, lifestyles, and tradition. Moreover, studying or reading news can increases thinking ability of a student and boost their memory.
In conclusion, Although there are so many subjects which are important for students, but in my opinion international news as a subject brings a lot of benefits for secondary school students.
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BAND – 6.0+
It concern by some individuals that secondary students should learn international news as a subject at school, while another group of people believe it is a waste of time. It is good for every students that learn international news at a school but not necessary at all.
On the one hand, in the meantime of secondary students have lots of dream for their better future career, that is the most enagageble time for their development of skills, knowledge. Although they have to learn schools education for good result in exam. After that they go to university but except this if they pay attention on learning international news as a subject at school , then it will more stress for them. But it also help to aware about worldwide situations and help to their longer career opportunity, find more easier job.
On the other hand, majority people believe that learning international news as a subject at school is a waste of time. It takes majority times of a student’s life, while they have to take preparation for a reputable university and find a better job. Some of students go to direct in any job they not pay attention on the university or any better soft skills. If they find any companies not asking a international news skills, they take this job . That’s why learning international news is not supportable from majority individuals.
In conclusion, learn international news as a subject at school is not very essential or attentional for secondary students but it is prominent way for better career opportunities. Also their attention need to be other subjects more than on it.
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BAND – 4.5
Nowadays, people hold different perspectives about learning international news as a compulsory subject of an institution. I believe that students would be globally developed and language proficient, if they get opportunity to learn this subject at early stage. However, it can be interrupted them about knowing their tradition properly when they spend more time on it.
One of the main advantages of learning international news at institution is globally awareness. Todays students are more keen to know about global situation due to technological development that led to know about globalization which happens cultural diversity. If secondary school students know about international news such as trade market, market news or sport news, they will be more stimulated in their lives that can ensure their future pathways. Moreover, majority of international news in school books should be written in English that led to language development. according to a recent survey, secondary students in India are more technologically developed in order to being English proficient that ensure to improve their technology industry.
Despite these advantages, it creates cultural barriers when students are forced to gain those news. To illustrate, addicting to gain international news separate students from countries conditions. As a consequence, student feel less about own countries development that happen negative improvement in countries sectors. In addition, student will be interrupted to know about countries tradition because of connecting with other culture by taking international news. Many under develop countries are struggled to preserve their regional language due to copping with exotic language by focusing on English language for taking international news.
In conclusion, although learning international news have disadvantages for preserving minority language and challenging countries economic growth, it makes nation globally aware and improve communication skill. So, I reckon that it should be included as a subject of countries institutions.
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BAND – 6.0+
In thought by some individuals that high school students should learn word wide news as a subject at school, while others think that it should not necessary because its a waste of time. In my opinion, when a student learn international news as a academic subject, they feel boring or less interested.
In the one hand, some people think secondary students should learn word wide news at their school because they should know what happened in the world .In the modern world, student have to be updated news ,otherwise they can not competed international students candidate in future for their higher studies. For example, if pupil will go abroad for their study program in future, they must have known their cultures, political subject and history. Otherwise, they would not survive in abroad. Moreover, if they learn international news in a academic away ,they will also improve their general knowledge. It helps them to learn new subject.
On the other hand, some people believe that learn international news as a subject waste of their time because lots of student have not any interest in this types of news. They have lots of pressure in their main group wise subject, for this reason they have not interested those subject and they feel boring.
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BAND – 4.5