The bar chart below shows number of visits made by tourists in different regions of the world in 2018. Units are measured in thousands/year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the portion of visits made by tourists in different regions of the world in the year 2018.
Overall, the USA was most popular destination for Paris whereas the London attracted the fewest visitors from Mexico. A clear distinction can be observed among the groups, the most of the visitors from Paris, London and Madrid regions generally higher portions of visits to most of the country compared to the other regions .
In terms of Paris region had highest visitation rate approximately 100 . This was closely followed by people in London with around 80 peoples in USA. In contras, Madrid showed a lower engagements with just under 80 people visiting this region. The Mexico was the least popular destination for all regions, with Istanbul at 20 and Paris at 22 except Madrid which show highly interest on this with 65.
Regarding the Istanbul demonstrated the highest preference for Canada with their visitation over 60. This was a significantly higher figure compared to other regions Madrid, Paris and London visiting at similar visitors of around 25,43,45 respectively .
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The provided bar chart illustrates the portion of visits made by tourists in different regions of the world in the year 2018.
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The provided bar chart illustrates the number of visits made by tourists to different regions of the world in 2018.
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Overall, the USA was most popular destination for Paris whereas the London attracted the fewest visitors from Mexico.
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Overall, the USA was the most popular destination for tourists from Paris, whereas London attracted the fewest visitors from Mexico.
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A clear distinction can be observed among the groups, the most of the visitors from Paris, London and Madrid regions generally higher portions of visits to most of the country compared to the other regions.
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A clear distinction can be observed among the groups, with most visitors from Paris, London, and Madrid showing generally higher numbers of visits to most countries compared to other regions.
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In terms of Paris region had highest visitation rate approximately 100 .
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In terms of the Paris region, it had the highest visitation rate at approximately 100.
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This was closely followed by people in London with around 80 peoples in USA.
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This was closely followed by visitors from London with around 80 people visiting the USA.
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In contras, Madrid showed a lower engagements with just under 80 people visiting this region.
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In contrast, Madrid showed a lower level of engagement, with just under 80 people visiting this region.
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The Mexico was the least popular destination for all regions, with Istanbul at 20 and Paris at 22 except Madrid which show highly interest on this with 65.
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Mexico was the least popular destination for all regions, with Istanbul at 20 and Paris at 22, except for Madrid, which showed high interest at 65.
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Regarding the Istanbul demonstrated the highest preference for Canada with their visitation over 60.
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Regarding Istanbul, this figure showed the highest preference for Canada, with visitor numbers exceeding 60.
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This was a significantly higher figure compared to other regions Madrid, Paris and London visiting at similar visitors of around 25,43,45 respectively.
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This was a significantly higher figure compared to other regions Madrid, Paris, and London, which had similar numbers of visitors at around 25, 43, and 45 respectively.
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The picture beneath displays number of toured made by various kinds of individuals in some part of the world in the year 2018.
It is clear that , the largest number of people visited America , while the lowest number of people toured Mexico. Overall , the most visited part is Paris, while the least visited place is London.
In USA , the most toured place is Paris , on the other hand the lowest visited place is Istanbul , which is 60 . While Canada is 2nd famous place for tourist , Istanbul is highest and Madrid is lowest for touring . It can also be seen that , even through USA has most tourist visited in Paris , Mexico has least visited tourist for Paris
In Mexico , the number of people visiting London and Istanbul is similar , on the other hand Madrid is the famous place in Mexico . I
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The picture beneath displays number of toured made by various kinds of individuals in some part of the world in the year 2018.
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The picture below displays the number of tours made by various kinds of individuals in some parts of the world in 2018.
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It is clear that , the largest number of people visited America , while the lowest number of people toured Mexico.
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It is clear that the largest number of people visited America, while the lowest number toured Mexico.
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Overall , the most visited part is Paris, while the least visited place is London.
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Overall, the most visited destination was Paris, while the least visited place was London.
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In USA , the most toured place is Paris , on the other hand the lowest visited place is Istanbul , which is 60 .
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In the USA, the most visited place was Paris, while the least visited was Istanbul, at 60.
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While Canada is 2nd famous place for tourist , Istanbul is highest and Madrid is lowest for touring .
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While Canada was the second most popular country for tourists, Istanbul had the highest and Madrid the lowest number of visits.
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It can also be seen that , even through USA has most tourist visited in Paris , Mexico has least visited tourist for Paris.
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It can also be seen that even though the USA had the most tourists visiting Paris, Mexico had the fewest tourists visiting Paris.
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In Mexico , the number of people visiting London and Istanbul is similar , on the other hand Madrid is the famous place in Mexico.
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In Mexico, the number of people visiting London and Istanbul was similar, whereas Madrid was the most popular destination.
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The bar chart displays number of visits made by tourists in various region of the world in the year 2018, where units are showed in thousands per year.
Overall, Paris had the highest number of tourists in USA, while London was at least in Mexico. USA held the most number of tourists and Mexico recorded the less number of tourists.
In terms of Mexico, Madrid was led by had nearly 60 thousands tourists in the year 2018, whereas London, Paris, Istanbul, had nearly similar number of tourists with 20 thousands. Moreover, in Canada, Istanbul was following the number of tourists in Madrid of Mexico, with nearly 80 thousands, while London, Paris, and Madrid respectively recorded 30, nearly 40, and 45 thousands tourists in the year 2018.
In United State o America, on the other hand, Paris was led the tourist number by 100 thousands tourists visit, while London tourists was behind of Paris with less 20 thousands tourists, Madrid and Istanbul both were at least with 20 thousands less from London in USA with nearly 60 thousands of visiting tourists .
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The bar chart displays number of visits made by tourists in various region of the world in the year 2018, where units are showed in thousands per year.
Correction:
The bar chart displays the number of visits made by tourists to various regions of the world in 2018, with units shown in thousands per year.
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Overall, Paris had the highest number of tourists in USA, while London was at least in Mexico.
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Overall, Paris had the highest number of tourists in the USA, while London was the least visited in Mexico.
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USA held the most number of tourists and Mexico recorded the less number of tourists.
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The USA recorded the highest number of tourists, whereas Mexico recorded the lowest.
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In terms of Mexico, Madrid was led by had nearly 60 thousands tourists in the year 2018, whereas London, Paris, Istanbul, had nearly similar number of tourists with 20 thousands.
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In Mexico, Madrid led with nearly 60 thousand tourists in 2018, whereas London, Paris, and Istanbul had similar numbers of tourists, around 20 thousand each.
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Moreover, in Canada, Istanbul was following the number of tourists in Madrid of Mexico, with nearly 80 thousands, while London, Paris, and Madrid respectively recorded 30, nearly 40, and 45 thousands tourists in the year 2018.
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Moreover, in Canada, Istanbul attracted nearly 80 thousand tourists, while London, Paris, and Madrid recorded approximately 30, 40, and 45 thousand visitors respectively.
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In United State o America, on the other hand, Paris was led the tourist number by 100 thousands tourists visit, while London tourists was behind of Paris with less 20 thousands tourists, Madrid and Istanbul both were at least with 20 thousands less from London in USA with nearly 60 thousands of visiting tourists.
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In the United States of America, on the other hand, Paris recorded 100 thousand visitors, while London followed with around 80 thousand. Madrid and Istanbul each received about 60 thousand visitors, 20 thousand fewer than London.
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punctuation)
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The bar chart displays number of visits create by tourists in different regions of the world in the year 2018.Unites are measured in thousands/year
It is clear that, United states of America leads the highest number. In Canada, Paris and the united kingdom had the similar proportion of tourists visitors.
In Mexico the highest visitor tourists are from Madrid, which is almost 70.On the other hand Istanbul and London had the similar proportion of visiting tourists in Mexico, while Mexico had 25 tourists visitors from Paris.
In terms of Canada, they had the highest number of tourists visitors from Istanbul, which is 70.On the other hand they also had almost similar proportion of visiting tourists from Paris and London. However Canada had 25 visiting tourists from Madrid. In the next, USA had the recorded visiting tourists 100 from Paris, while they had 60 visiting tourists from Istanbul in meantime. The USA also had 70 visitors from Madrid and 80 from London
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The bar chart displays number of visits create by tourists in different regions of the world in the year 2018.Unites are measured in thousands/year
Correction:
The bar chart displays the number of visits made by tourists to different regions of the world in 2018. Units are measured in thousands per year.
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It is clear that, United states of America leads the highest number.
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It is clear that the United States of America had the highest number of tourists.
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In Canada, Paris and the united kingdom had the similar proportion of tourists visitors.
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In Canada, Paris and the United Kingdom had a similar proportion of tourists.
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In Mexico the highest visitor tourists are from Madrid, which is almost 70.On the other hand Istanbul and London had the similar proportion of visiting tourists in Mexico, while Mexico had 25 tourists visitors from Paris.
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In Mexico, the highest number of tourists visited Madrid, with nearly 70 thousand. On the other hand, Istanbul and London had a similar number of visitors, while Paris had 25 thousand tourists.
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In terms of Canada, they had the highest number of tourists visitors from Istanbul, which is 70.On the other hand they also had almost similar proportion of visiting tourists from Paris and London. However Canada had 25 visiting tourists from Madrid.
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In Canada, the highest number of tourists visited Istanbul, at 70 thousand. Paris and London had a similar number of visitors, while Madrid had 25 thousand.
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In the next, USA had the recorded visiting tourists 100 from Paris, while they had 60 visiting tourists from Istanbul in meantime. The USA also had 70 visitors from Madrid and 80 from London
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In the USA, Paris recorded 100 thousand visitors, while Istanbul had 60 thousand. The USA also had 70 thousand visitors from Madrid and 80 thousand from London.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of tourists in Mexico , Canada, and
USA in 2018 and units are measured in thousands year.
overall,the USA tourists proportion was the highest in thousands year they visits in Paris in this era.on the other hand Mexico’s visitors percentage were equal participation in two cities that’s are London and
Istanbul.
overall, The USA citizen mostly visit’s in France capital the proportion is 100, where the Mexico population were few interested on them(20).They were fond to visits Spain’s capital
(65%).wheres Canadian prefer Istanbul their percentage is almost 70%.
The USA people also visits in London thats portin is 80%.thay also visits Madrid its portion is vi
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of visits made by tourists in Mexico, Canada, USA of the world in 2018.
It is clear that, the USA had most highest number of tourists visited in London, Paris, Madrid however, Istanbul had highest on Canada. Additionally, People had significant visited in USA.
To begin with, USA had 100 thousands people visit in Paris, while 20 thousands less london at 80 thousands , while Madrid and Istanbul followed by this figure 70 thousands and and 60 thousands respectively.
In Canada, highest number of tourist by istanbul was 70 thousands, this figure london had 50 thousands which had half of madrid was 25 thousands, than paris was followed by london at 42 thousands. In contrast, Mexico had most leat number of visited tourists, pick up on 62 thousands on Madrid, and istanbul and London was same number of visited at 20 thousands, the last trend on paris which was over the 20 thousands in the meantime.
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The bar chart illustrates the amount of visits made by tourists in Mexico, Canada, USA of the world in 2018.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of visits made by tourists to Mexico, Canada, and the USA in 2018.
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It is clear that, the USA had most highest number of tourists visited in London, Paris, Madrid however, Istanbul had highest on Canada. Additionally, People had significant visited in USA.
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It is clear that the USA had the highest number of tourists visiting London, Paris, and Madrid, whereas Istanbul had the highest number in Canada. Additionally, people visited the USA significantly.
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To begin with, USA had 100 thousands people visit in Paris, while 20 thousands less london at 80 thousands , while Madrid and Istanbul followed by this figure 70 thousands and and 60 thousands respectively.
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To begin with, the USA had 100 thousand visitors to Paris, 20 thousand fewer to London at 80 thousand, while Madrid and Istanbul followed with 70 and 60 thousand respectively.
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In Canada, highest number of tourist by istanbul was 70 thousands, this figure london had 50 thousands which had half of madrid was 25 thousands, than paris was followed by london at 42 thousands.
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In Canada, the highest number of tourists came from Istanbul at 70 thousand. London followed with 50 thousand, which was about twice the number for Madrid at 25 thousand, while Paris accounted for 42 thousand.
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In contrast, Mexico had most leat number of visited tourists, pick up on 62 thousands on Madrid, and istanbul and London was same number of visited at 20 thousands, the last trend on paris which was over the 20 thousands in the meantime.
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In contrast, Mexico had the lowest number of tourists, with 62 thousand visiting Madrid. Istanbul and London had the same number of visitors at 20 thousand, while Paris was slightly above 20 thousand.
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the bar chart illustrates data about number of visits made by tourists in different regions of the world in 2018.
Overall , all the countries spent most their money on Mexico, Canada , and USA . Although the highest invester country is USA spent their hihgest proportion of money which was 100 thousands tourists in different regions the world .
It is clear that , the USA spent the most in all types of goods compared to Canada and Maxico . However, both countries had their highest expenditure on tourists . In the main time , mexico soent the least on visits .
Overall we can see that the lowest number is 20 yea , and the highest number is 100 year . So its clear the highest country is USA and the lowest is Mexico .
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The bar chart illustrates the number of tourists in Mexico , Canada, andUSA in 2018 and units are measured in thousands year.
Correction:
The bar chart illustrates the number of tourists in Mexico, Canada, and the USA in 2018, with units measured in thousands per year.
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overall,the USA tourists proportion was the highest in thousands year they visits in Paris in this era.on the other hand Mexico’s visitors percentage were equal participation in two cities that’s are London andIstanbul.
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Overall, the proportion of tourists from the USA was the highest, as they visited Paris the most in that year. On the other hand, Mexico’s visitors were equally divided between London and Istanbul.
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overall, The USA citizen mostly visit’s in France capital the proportion is 100, where the Mexico population were few interested on them(20).They were fond to visits Spain’s capital(65%).wheres Canadian prefer Istanbul their percentage is almost 70%.
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The USA citizens mostly visited the capital of France, with a proportion of 100, whereas Mexican tourists showed little interest (20%). They preferred visiting Spain’s capital (65%), while Canadians preferred Istanbul, with about 70%.
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The USA people also visits in London thats portin is 80%.thay also visits Madrid its portion is vi
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Tourists from the USA also visited London, where the portion was 80%. They also visited Madrid, though the information was incomplete.
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the bar chart illustrates data about number of visits made by tourists in different regions of the world in 2018.
Correction:
The bar chart illustrates data about the number of visits made by tourists to different regions of the world in 2018.
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Overall , all the countries spent most their money on Mexico, Canada , and USA . Although the highest invester country is USA spent their hihgest proportion of money which was 100 thousands tourists in different regions the world .
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Overall, all the countries spent most of their money on Mexico, Canada, and the USA. The USA was the highest investor country, spending the largest proportion with 100 thousand tourists visiting different regions of the world.
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It is clear that , the USA spent the most in all types of goods compared to Canada and Maxico . However, both countries had their highest expenditure on tourists . In the main time , mexico soent the least on visits .
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It is clear that the USA spent the most in all categories compared to Canada and Mexico. However, both countries had their highest expenditure on tourism. Meanwhile, Mexico spent the least on visits.
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Overall we can see that the lowest number is 20 yea , and the highest number is 100 year . So its clear the highest country is USA and the lowest is Mexico .
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Overall, it can be seen that the lowest number was 20, and the highest was 100. So, it is clear that the USA had the highest number, while Mexico had the lowest.
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The bar graph compares number of visits made by tourists in various nations of the earth in the year 2018
Overall, In Paris, USA visitors were the highest, while Mexico’s tourists were lowest at the meantime. Moreover, Istanbul was visited by Canadian tourists, on the other hand Mexico’s tourists was lowest in the meantime.
In terms of United Kingdom, USA was highest in visiting Paris which was 100 in numbers ,while Mexico was lowest which was 25 . However, USA was again highest at United Kingdom that was 80 in numbers. Canadian tourists was highest in Istanbul ,while Mexico was lowest around 3 time.
In Madrid, Mexico was highest on the other hand
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The bar graph compares number of visits made by tourists in various nations of the earth in the year 2018.
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The bar graph compares the number of visits made by tourists to various countries around the world in 2018.
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Overall, In Paris, USA visitors were the highest, while Mexico’s tourists were lowest at the meantime. Moreover, Istanbul was visited by Canadian tourists, on the other hand Mexico’s tourists was lowest in the meantime.
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Overall, in Paris, visitors from the USA were the highest, while those from Mexico were the lowest. Moreover, Istanbul was most visited by Canadian tourists, whereas Mexico had the fewest visitors during the same period.
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In terms of United Kingdom, USA was highest in visiting Paris which was 100 in numbers ,while Mexico was lowest which was 25 . However, USA was again highest at United Kingdom that was 80 in numbers. Canadian tourists was highest in Istanbul ,while Mexico was lowest around 3 time.
Correction:
In terms of visits, tourists from the USA made the highest number to Paris at 100, while Mexico recorded the lowest at 25. However, the USA was again highest in the United Kingdom with 80, whereas Canadian tourists recorded the highest figure in Istanbul, and Mexico’s number was about three times lower.
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In Madrid, Mexico was highest on the other hand
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In Madrid, Mexico recorded the highest number of visitors.
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The bar graph compares data about the expenditure on Mexico , Canada, USA ,by tourist in different regions of world in the year 2018 .
Overall , the highest number of people in USA ,While the lowest number of people was Mexico .on the other Mexico visitor people in equal for London and Istanbul .
In USA , approximately 100 % people in Paris ,while was followed by the London , Madrid , and Istanbul .Canada on the other hand ,spend there largest proportion on Istanbul ,at around 65%.Whereas the Mexico was at least with nearly 20%.
In Mexico , the number o
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The bar graph compares data about the expenditure on Mexico , Canada, USA ,by tourist in different regions of world in the year 2018 .
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The bar graph compares data about the expenditure by tourists on Mexico, Canada, and the USA in different regions of the world in 2018.
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Overall , the highest number of people in USA ,While the lowest number of people was Mexico .on the other Mexico visitor people in equal for London and Istanbul .
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Overall, the highest number of tourists was in the USA, while the lowest was in Mexico. On the other hand, the number of Mexican visitors was equal for London and Istanbul.
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In USA , approximately 100 % people in Paris ,while was followed by the London , Madrid , and Istanbul .
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In the USA, approximately 100% of tourists visited Paris, followed by London, Madrid, and Istanbul.
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Canada on the other hand ,spend there largest proportion on Istanbul ,at around 65%.
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Canada, on the other hand, spent its largest proportion on Istanbul, at around 65%.
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Whereas the Mexico was at least with nearly 20%.
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Whereas Mexico had the lowest proportion, at nearly 20%.
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In Mexico , the number o
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Incomplete sentence..
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The bar chart illustrates the number of visits made by tourists of four different regions in the world in the year 2018.
Overall, the highest number of visitors were from the USA who went to Paris, whereas most of the Canadians went to Istanbul. So, the highest number of visitors chose Paris, Istanbul and Madrid respectively.
Visitors from the USA were the highest in number that is nearly 1 lakh who visited Paris. On the other hand, most of the Canadians visited Istanbul, while visitors from Mexico went to Madrid the most.
People from the USA visited Istanbul the least, while the number of Canadians visitors were less in Madrid. However, people from Mexico had its lowest visitors in London and Istanbul both.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of visits made by tourists of four different regions in the world in the year 2018.
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The bar chart illustrates the number of visits made by tourists from four different regions of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistake – “of” → “from” for nationality/region; unnecessary “the year”; overall good sentence)
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Overall, the highest number of visitors were from the USA who went to Paris, whereas most of the Canadians went to Istanbul. So, the highest number of visitors chose Paris, Istanbul and Madrid respectively.
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Overall, the highest number of visitors were from the USA who went to Paris, whereas most Canadians travelled to Istanbul. In general, the most visited destinations were Paris, Istanbul, and Madrid respectively.
📝 (Mistake – “most of the Canadians” → “most Canadians” is more natural; avoid “So” in academic writing; slight wording improvement)
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Visitors from the USA were the highest in number that is nearly 1 lakh who visited Paris. On the other hand, most of the Canadians visited Istanbul, while visitors from Mexico went to Madrid the most.
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Visitors from the USA were the highest in number, at nearly 100,000 who visited Paris. On the other hand, most Canadians visited Istanbul, while visitors from Mexico mostly went to Madrid.
📝 (Mistake – “1 lakh” → not used in IELTS; use “100,000”; small punctuation issues; “the most” → “mostly” sounds smoother here)
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People from the USA visited Istanbul the least, while the number of Canadians visitors were less in Madrid. However, people from Mexico had its lowest visitors in London and Istanbul both.
Correction:
People from the USA visited Istanbul the least, while the number of Canadian visitors was lower in Madrid. However, Mexico had the lowest number of visitors to both London and Istanbul.
📝 (Mistake – “Canadians visitors” → “Canadian visitors”; verb agreement “were” → “was”; “had its” → “had the”; article and preposition use improved)
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The bar chart compares data about the rate of visitors which is made by tourists in several regions in the earth of the year of 2018.
overall,Paris was the highest tourists in USA at 100 years,Whereas Maxico shows the least number in Istambul with 20 thousands over the year.
In Paris, was spending most of the number of tourists over the all countries with 100 years in USA,which followed by London at the same country at 80 thousands.the ratio of tourists in Madrid and Istambul was 60 and around 65 year respectfully.
In Canada, mejority of visitors was istanbul around 70 decates,while london was keast in Mexico with only 20 years. moreover, madrid recorded the highest in Mexico approximately 64 years,but this figure was halved in Canada close to 30 years.on the other hand, istanbul reserved around 75 years visitors in Canada,while only 20 decades was Mexico over the period.
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The bar chart compares data about the rate of visitors which is made by tourists in several regions in the earth of the year of 2018.
Correction:
The bar chart compares the number of visits made by tourists to several regions of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – “rate” → “number”; “which is made by tourists” unnecessary; “in the earth” → “of the world”; wordy structure)
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overall,Paris was the highest tourists in USA at 100 years,Whereas Maxico shows the least number in Istambul with 20 thousands over the year.
Correction:
Overall, Paris received the highest number of tourists from the USA at 100,000, whereas Mexico had the lowest number in Istanbul with 20,000 visitors.
📝 (Mistakes – capitalization; “highest tourists” → “highest number of tourists”; “years” → wrong unit; “Maxico” → “Mexico”; grammar)
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In Paris, was spending most of the number of tourists over the all countries with 100 years in USA,which followed by London at the same country at 80 thousands.the ratio of tourists in Madrid and Istambul was 60 and around 65 year respectfully.
Correction:
In Paris, the USA recorded the highest number of tourists at 100,000, followed by London with 80,000. The number of tourists visiting Madrid and Istanbul was about 60,000 and 65,000 respectively.
📝 (Mistakes – sentence missing subject; “spending” incorrect; “over the all” → “among all”; wrong units “years”; “respectfully” → “respectively”)
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In Canada, mejority of visitors was istanbul around 70 decates,while london was keast in Mexico with only 20 years. moreover, madrid recorded the highest in Mexico approximately 64 years,but this figure was halved in Canada close to 30 years.on the other hand, istanbul reserved around 75 years visitors in Canada,while only 20 decades was Mexico over the period.
Correction:
In Canada, the majority of visitors went to Istanbul, around 70,000, while London was the least visited in Mexico with only 20,000. Moreover, Madrid recorded the highest number of tourists in Mexico, approximately 64,000, but this figure was halved in Canada to about 30,000. On the other hand, Istanbul received around 75,000 visitors from Canada, while Mexico had only 20,000 during the same period.
📝 (Mistakes – spelling “mejority” → “majority”; wrong units “decades/years”; unclear structure; article & preposition errors; repetition; inconsistent punctuation)
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1️⃣ Original:
The bar chart compares data about the rate of visitors which is made by tourists in several regions in the earth of the year of 2018.
Correction:
The bar chart compares the number of visits made by tourists to several regions of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – “rate” → “number”; “which is made by tourists” unnecessary; “in the earth” → “of the world”; wordy structure)
2️⃣ Original:
overall,Paris was the highest tourists in USA at 100 years,Whereas Maxico shows the least number in Istambul with 20 thousands over the year.
Correction:
Overall, Paris received the highest number of tourists from the USA at 100,000, whereas Mexico had the lowest number in Istanbul with 20,000 visitors.
📝 (Mistakes – capitalization; “highest tourists” → “highest number of tourists”; “years” → wrong unit; “Maxico” → “Mexico”; grammar)
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In Paris, was spending most of the number of tourists over the all countries with 100 years in USA,which followed by London at the same country at 80 thousands.the ratio of tourists in Madrid and Istambul was 60 and around 65 year respectfully.
Correction:
In Paris, the USA recorded the highest number of tourists at 100,000, followed by London with 80,000. The number of tourists visiting Madrid and Istanbul was about 60,000 and 65,000 respectively.
📝 (Mistakes – sentence missing subject; “spending” incorrect; “over the all” → “among all”; wrong units “years”; “respectfully” → “respectively”)
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In Canada, mejority of visitors was istanbul around 70 decates,while london was keast in Mexico with only 20 years. moreover, madrid recorded the highest in Mexico approximately 64 years,but this figure was halved in Canada close to 30 years.on the other hand, istanbul reserved around 75 years visitors in Canada,while only 20 decades was Mexico over the period.
Correction:
In Canada, the majority of visitors went to Istanbul, around 70,000, while London was the least visited in Mexico with only 20,000. Moreover, Madrid recorded the highest number of tourists in Mexico, approximately 64,000, but this figure was halved in Canada to about 30,000. On the other hand, Istanbul received around 75,000 visitors from Canada, while Mexico had only 20,000 during the same period.
📝 (Mistakes – spelling “mejority” → “majority”; wrong units “decades/years”; unclear structure; article & preposition errors; repetition; inconsistent punctuation)
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1️⃣ Original:
The bar chart compares data about the rate of visitors which is made by tourists in several regions in the earth of the year of 2018.
Correction:
The bar chart compares the number of visits made by tourists to several regions of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – “rate” → “number”; “which is made by tourists” unnecessary; “in the earth” → “of the world”; wordy structure)
2️⃣ Original:
overall,Paris was the highest tourists in USA at 100 years,Whereas Maxico shows the least number in Istambul with 20 thousands over the year.
Correction:
Overall, Paris received the highest number of tourists from the USA at 100,000, whereas Mexico had the lowest number in Istanbul with 20,000 visitors.
📝 (Mistakes – capitalization; “highest tourists” → “highest number of tourists”; “years” → wrong unit; “Maxico” → “Mexico”; grammar)
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In Paris, was spending most of the number of tourists over the all countries with 100 years in USA,which followed by London at the same country at 80 thousands.the ratio of tourists in Madrid and Istambul was 60 and around 65 year respectfully.
Correction:
In Paris, the USA recorded the highest number of tourists at 100,000, followed by London with 80,000. The number of tourists visiting Madrid and Istanbul was about 60,000 and 65,000 respectively.
📝 (Mistakes – sentence missing subject; “spending” incorrect; “over the all” → “among all”; wrong units “years”; “respectfully” → “respectively”)
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In Canada, mejority of visitors was istanbul around 70 decates,while london was keast in Mexico with only 20 years. moreover, madrid recorded the highest in Mexico approximately 64 years,but this figure was halved in Canada close to 30 years.on the other hand, istanbul reserved around 75 years visitors in Canada,while only 20 decades was Mexico over the period.
Correction:
In Canada, the majority of visitors went to Istanbul, around 70,000, while London was the least visited in Mexico with only 20,000. Moreover, Madrid recorded the highest number of tourists in Mexico, approximately 64,000, but this figure was halved in Canada to about 30,000. On the other hand, Istanbul received around 75,000 visitors from Canada, while Mexico had only 20,000 during the same period.
📝 (Mistakes – spelling “mejority” → “majority”; wrong units “decades/years”; unclear structure; article & preposition errors; repetition; inconsistent punctuation)
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The picture displays number of visits made by tourists in several regions of the world in the year 2018.
overall, paris was the highest in USA,while mexico shows the least number in istanbul.
In paris,was spending most of the number of tourists over the all countries with 100 years in USA,which followed by London at the same country at 60 thousands.the ratio of tourists in Madrid and istanbul was 60 and around 65 year respectfully.
in canada, mejority of visitors was istanbul around 70 decates ,while london was least in mexico with only 20 years.moreover, madrid recorded the highest in mexico approximetely 64 years.but the figure was halved in canada close to 30 years.on the ither hand, istanbul receved around 75 years visitors in canada.while only 20 decades was mexico over the period.
1️⃣ Original:
The picture displays number of visits made by tourists in several regions of the world in the year 2018.
Correction:
The picture displays the number of visits made by tourists to several regions of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – missing article “the,” wrong preposition “in” → “to”)
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overall, paris was the highest in USA,while mexico shows the least number in istanbul.
Correction:
Overall, Paris received the highest number of tourists from the USA, while Mexico had the lowest number in Istanbul.
📝 (Mistakes – capitalization, verb form “shows” → “had,” article missing, punctuation, clarity)
3️⃣ Original:
In paris,was spending most of the number of tourists over the all countries with 100 years in USA,which followed by London at the same country at 60 thousands.the ratio of tourists in Madrid and istanbul was 60 and around 65 year respectfully.
Correction:
In Paris, the USA had the highest number of tourists at 100,000, followed by London with 60,000. The number of tourists visiting Madrid and Istanbul was about 60,000 and 65,000 respectively.
📝 (Mistakes – sentence missing subject; “was spending” wrong; “over the all” → “among all”; units “years” wrong; “respectfully” → “respectively”; punctuation, clarity)
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in canada, mejority of visitors was istanbul around 70 decates ,while london was least in mexico with only 20 years.
Correction:
In Canada, the majority of visitors went to Istanbul, around 70,000, while London was the least visited in Mexico, with only 20,000.
📝 (Mistakes – capitalization, spelling “mejority” → “majority,” wrong units “decates/years,” article missing, sentence structure)
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moreover, madrid recorded the highest in mexico approximetely 64 years.but the figure was halved in canada close to 30 years.
Correction:
Moreover, Madrid recorded the highest number of visitors in Mexico, approximately 64,000, but this figure was halved in Canada, close to 30,000.
📝 (Mistakes – spelling “approximetely” → “approximately,” units wrong, sentence fragments, capitalization, punctuation)
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on the ither hand, istanbul receved around 75 years visitors in canada.while only 20 decades was mexico over the period.
Correction:
On the other hand, Istanbul received around 75,000 visitors from Canada, while Mexico had only 20,000 over the same period.
📝 (Mistakes – spelling “ither” → “other,” “receved” → “received,” units wrong, sentence fragments, capitalization, punctuation)
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The graph chart display number of visits made by tourists in various regions of the world in the year 2018 .
overall, in the three county three types of highest ratio people visits Paris ,Islanbul, Madrid i . all that USA is was highest number of people visited, while Mexico was lowest number of people was visited.
In tarm of USA highest number Paris it was 100 , while lowest number of Istanbul 60 people visited . in the Canada highest number of people visited Istanbul was 70 and lowest Madrid number was 30. On the other hand , Mexico had highest number of people visited by Madrid 65.
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The graph chart display number of visits made by tourists in various regions of the world in the year 2018 .
Correction:
The bar chart displays the number of visits made by tourists to various regions of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – “graph chart” → “bar chart,” verb form “display” → “displays,” preposition “in” → “to,” unnecessary “the year”)
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overall, in the three county three types of highest ratio people visits Paris ,Islanbul, Madrid i . all that USA is was highest number of people visited, while Mexico was lowest number of people was visited.
Correction:
Overall, in the three countries, the highest number of visitors went to Paris, Istanbul, and Madrid. The USA recorded the highest number of visitors, while Mexico had the lowest.
📝 (Mistakes – capitalization, spelling “county” → “countries,” “Islanbul” → “Istanbul,” grammar “is was,” awkward phrasing “ratio people visits,” punctuation, sentence clarity)
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In tarm of USA highest number Paris it was 100 , while lowest number of Istanbul 60 people visited .
Correction:
In terms of the USA, the highest number of tourists visited Paris at 100,000, while the lowest number visited Istanbul at 60,000.
📝 (Mistakes – spelling “tarm” → “term,” missing prepositions, sentence structure, units “people” → “thousand visitors,” punctuation)
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in the Canada highest number of people visited Istanbul was 70 and lowest Madrid number was 30.
Correction:
In Canada, the highest number of visitors went to Istanbul at 70,000, while the lowest number went to Madrid at 30,000.
📝 (Mistakes – capitalization, missing article “the,” sentence structure, unit consistency, verb form)
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On the other hand , Mexico had highest number of people visited by Madrid 65.
Correction:
On the other hand, Mexico had the highest number of visitors to Madrid at 65,000.
📝 (Mistakes – missing article “the,” awkward phrasing “visited by Madrid,” punctuation, unit consistencyBand 5Band
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The picture beneath displays number of toured made by various kinds of individuals in some part of the world in the year 2018.
It is clear that the largest number of people visited America , while the lowest number of people toured Mexico. Overall, the most visited part is Paris , while the least visited place in London.
In UAS , the most toured place is Paris. One the other hand, the lowest visited place is Istanbul , which is 60%. While Canada is 2nd famous place for tourist, Istanbul is highest and Madrid is lowest for touring . It can also be seen that, even through USA has most tourist visited in Paris , Mexico has least visited tourist for Paris.
In Mexico , the number of visiting
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The picture beneath displays number of toured made by various kinds of individuals in some part of the world in the year 2018.
Correction:
The picture below displays the number of tours made by various individuals in different parts of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – “beneath” → “below,” missing article “the,” “toured made” → “tours made,” “some part” → “different parts”)
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It is clear that the largest number of people visited America , while the lowest number of people toured Mexico.
Correction:
It is clear that the largest number of people visited the USA, while the lowest number visited Mexico.
📝 (Mistakes – article “the” before “USA,” redundant “toured” → “visited,” capitalization, punctuation spacing)
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Overall, the most visited part is Paris , while the least visited place in London.
Correction:
Overall, the most visited place is Paris, while the least visited place is London.
📝 (Mistakes – “part” → “place,” missing verb “is” after “least visited place,” punctuation spacing)
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In UAS , the most toured place is Paris. One the other hand, the lowest visited place is Istanbul , which is 60%.
Correction:
In the USA, the most visited place is Paris. On the other hand, the least visited place is Istanbul, with 60% of visitors.
📝 (Mistakes – “UAS” → “USA,” “One the other hand” → “On the other hand,” “lowest” → “least,” punctuation, spacing, clarity)
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While Canada is 2nd famous place for tourist, Istanbul is highest and Madrid is lowest for touring .
Correction:
In Canada, Istanbul is the most visited, while Madrid is the least visited.
📝 (Mistakes – “2nd famous place” → “most visited/least visited,” “tourist” → “visitors,” sentence structure, punctuation)
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It can also be seen that, even through USA has most tourist visited in Paris , Mexico has least visited tourist for Paris.
Correction:
It can also be seen that although the USA had the most visitors to Paris, Mexico had the fewest.
📝 (Mistakes – “even through” → “although,” “most tourist visited” → “the most visitors,” “least visited tourist for Paris” → “fewest,” sentence structure, punctuation)
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In Mexico , the number of visiting
Correction:
Incomplete sentence. Needs continuation.
📝 (Mistakes – sentence fragment, incomplete data, missing punctuation)
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The given bar chart provides number of visits made by tourists in different regions of the world in 2018
Overall, USA was most popular visited destination by all the countries and Mexico was the lowest at the meantime ,
In terms of Paris region was the highest visitation rate approximately 100, and it was followed by London closely by 80, in countries Madrid had the lower just by 60, In Canada Istanbul was the highest visitors by 75, and it followed by London about 50 ,and Paris was also similarly 45, and Madrid was lowest compare to the others country.
In Mexico Madrid was the highest visitors by 65, and in the Paris 25 visitors and Instanbul and London are approximately similar with visitors each .
1️⃣ Original:
The given bar chart provides number of visits made by tourists in different regions of the world in 2018
Correction:
The given bar chart provides the number of visits made by tourists to different regions of the world in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – missing article “the,” preposition “in” → “to”)
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Overall, USA was most popular visited destination by all the countries and Mexico was the lowest at the meantime ,
Correction:
Overall, the USA was the most popular destination for tourists from all countries, while Mexico was the least visited.
📝 (Mistakes – missing article “the,” word order “most popular visited” → “most popular,” “at the meantime” → “least visited,” punctuation spacing)
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In terms of Paris region was the highest visitation rate approximately 100, and it was followed by London closely by 80, in countries Madrid had the lower just by 60,
Correction:
In terms of the Paris region, the visitation rate was the highest at approximately 100, followed closely by London at 80. In comparison, Madrid had the lowest rate at 60.
📝 (Mistakes – missing article “the,” sentence structure, “in countries” unclear, “had the lower” → “had the lowest,” punctuation, clarity)
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In Canada Istanbul was the highest visitors by 75, and it followed by London about 50 ,and Paris was also similarly 45, and Madrid was lowest compare to the others country.
Correction:
In Canada, Istanbul had the highest number of visitors at 75, followed by London at about 50, Paris at 45, and Madrid had the lowest number compared to the other regions.
📝 (Mistakes – missing commas, article “the,” verb form “was lowest compare” → “had the lowest number compared,” clarity, plural form “others country” → “other regions”)
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In Mexico Madrid was the highest visitors by 65, and in the Paris 25 visitors and Instanbul and London are approximately similar with visitors each .
Correction:
In Mexico, Madrid had the highest number of visitors at 65, while Paris had 25 visitors, and Istanbul and London had approximately similar numbers of visitors.
📝 (Mistakes – punctuation, articles, verb agreement, “are approximately similar with visitors each” → “had approximately similar numbers of visitors,” spelling “Instanbul” → “Istanbul”)
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The bar chart demonstrate data about the portion of visits by visitors in three different nations of the world in the year 2018.
Overall, USA had the largest proportion of tourists from Paris, while Mexico had the least tourists from Paris. However, Istanbul tourists was the highest in Canada, they, although was least in Mexico.
In terms of Mexico, Madrid tourists was the highest among all other tourists, while London and Istanbul tourists was shared equally with 20% of each. However, Paris tourists was just above 20% which made it the second highest. In contrast, Canada had the highest number of tourists from Istanbul, while London followed it with approximately 30%. Although, Paris visitors was the nearly 40%, but Madrid was the least.
In contrast, USA had the highest in with 100% from Paris, however, Istanbul was the least. Moreover, London was only 80%
1️⃣ Original:
The bar chart demonstrate data about the portion of visits by visitors in three different nations of the world in the year 2018.
Correction:
The bar chart demonstrates data about the proportion of visits by tourists to three different countries in 2018.
📝 (Mistakes – verb “demonstrate” → “demonstrates,” “portion” → “proportion,” “visitors” → “tourists,” “in the year of 2018” → “in 2018”)
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Overall, USA had the largest proportion of tourists from Paris, while Mexico had the least tourists from Paris. However, Istanbul tourists was the highest in Canada, they, although was least in Mexico.
Correction:
Overall, the USA had the largest proportion of tourists from Paris, while Mexico had the fewest. Istanbul was most visited by tourists from Canada, but least visited by tourists from Mexico.
📝 (Mistakes – missing article “the,” “least tourists” → “fewest,” “Istanbul tourists was” → “Istanbul was most visited,” sentence structure, punctuation, clarity)
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In terms of Mexico, Madrid tourists was the highest among all other tourists, while London and Istanbul tourists was shared equally with 20% of each. However, Paris tourists was just above 20% which made it the second highest.
Correction:
In Mexico, Madrid received the highest number of tourists, while London and Istanbul had an equal share of 20% each. Paris had just over 20%, making it the second highest.
📝 (Mistakes – verb agreement “was” → “had/received,” “all other tourists” redundant, sentence structure, clarity, punctuation)
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In contrast, Canada had the highest number of tourists from Istanbul, while London followed it with approximately 30%. Although, Paris visitors was the nearly 40%, but Madrid was the least.
Correction:
In Canada, Istanbul had the highest number of tourists, followed by London with approximately 30%. Paris accounted for nearly 40%, while Madrid had the fewest visitors.
📝 (Mistakes – “was the nearly 40%” → “accounted for nearly 40%,” verb agreement, sentence connectors, punctuation, clarity)
5️⃣ Original:
In contrast, USA had the highest in with 100% from Paris, however, Istanbul was the least. Moreover, London was only 80%
Correction:
In the USA, Paris had the highest number of visitors at 100, while Istanbul had the fewest. London had about 80 visitors.
📝 (Mistakes – awkward phrasing “highest in with 100%,” missing article, punctuation, units unclear, “only 80%” → “about 80 visitors” for clarity)
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