- Many people feel that students should learn from online materials, while others feel that it is better to use printed materials.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
2. Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
1. In my own opinion pupils get more advantages to use printed materials . Others , however online materials that there are `
The TASK RESPONSE is incomplete.
1. “In my own opinion” → Repetitive expression. “In my opinion” is enough.
2. “pupils get more advantages to use” → Incorrect structure. After “advantages,” we use “in using” or “from using”, not “to use.”
3. Extra space before periods and commas → Incorrect punctuation.
4. Second clause: “Others, however online materials that there are” → Grammatically inaccurate and incomplete. Missing main verb and connector (e.g., prefer, believe that).
Although a large number of people think that students should learn from materials which are found in the internet whereas the remaining prefer printed materials. Using online material is less costly but many students find it very hard to study from the internet. Printed materials are hard to carry so it is a big disadvantage of it.
Studying from materials found in the internet often provides more opportunities to the students because they can save money, which are used to buy printed materials. They can also find better materials for their studies, if they are comfortable studying online because many websites provide a large number of books or materials for free. Also they can carry many books or materials in their devise so that they can easily study from remote areas without facing the problem of carrying books. But students with eye and migraine problem suffer while studying from online sources because it effects their health.
On the other hand, printed materials are more handy so that many students are comfortable with these. Scribbling across book is often helpful for many students while memorizing or learning anything. But getting printed material is costly so that many have to spend a good amount of money to get their hands into this materials. Also studying from materials which are printed does not effect health.
In conclusion, learning from online sources might seem hard for many yet it has more positive sites than studying from printed sources. I believe online sources help students to get more sources which help them to acquire better knowledge and learn more.
1. “Although a large number of people think that students should learn from materials which are found in the internet whereas the remaining prefer printed materials.”
“Although … whereas …” → Incorrect structure. You should not use although and whereas together — both express contrast. Use only one.
“in the internet” → Wrong preposition. It should be “on the internet.”
“the remaining” → Awkward phrasing. Better to say “others” or “the others.”
2. “Using online material is less costly but many students find it very hard to study from the internet.”
“material” → Should be plural (“materials”) because it refers to different sources.
Missing comma before “but” → There should be a comma before but when connecting two independent clauses.
3. “Printed materials are hard to carry so it is a big disadvantage of it.”
“so it is a big disadvantage of it” → Awkward and repetitive. Better to say “which is a major disadvantage.”
4. “Studying from materials found in the internet often provides more opportunities to the students because they can save money, which are used to buy printed materials.”
“in the internet” → Should be “on the internet.”
“to the students” → Should be “for students.”
“which are used to buy” → Wrong verb form. Should be “which would otherwise be used to buy.”
5. “They can also find better materials for their studies, if they are comfortable studying online because many websites provide a large number of books or materials for free.”
Comma before “if” → Unnecessary comma; remove it.
Repetition of “materials” → Slightly repetitive; could use “resources” for variety.
6. “But students with eye and migraine problem suffer while studying from online sources because it effects their health.”
“But” → Starting with “But” is too informal for academic writing. Use “However.”
“eye and migraine problem” → Should be “eye or migraine problems.” (plural and correct conjunction)
“effects” → Wrong form. Should be “affects.” (Affect is the verb.*)
7. “But getting printed material is costly so that many have to spend a good amount of money to get their hands into this materials.”
“But” → Replace with “However.”
“so that” → Incorrect usage again; just use “so” or “therefore.”
“get their hands into” → Wrong idiom. Should be “get their hands on.”
“this materials” → Wrong form. Should be “these materials.”
It is believed by some that criminal activities are decreased by the development of tech industry. While others think that tech industry is encouraging crime. I totally agree with the latter statement, because, the over development of technology is increasing crime rate not only in outside areas but also in online platforms.
In this current world technology development ratio is in its highest level. Good uses of technology is definitely giving many benefits. Modern technology is being used in schools, colleges, universities and so on other official institutions. Without the uses of technology, it is tough to survive in this modern world. Students are developing their skills in many platforms and participating in many online competitions.
On the other hand, it feels bad to say but it is true that, development of technology is also increasing criminal activities. Every students, every employees are not using this in good ways. some employees are using technologies to scam people. Students are wasting their times in scrolling Facebook or Instagram reels. They are getting addicted to blue films, which is destroying the new generation day by day. Coding experts are misusing their skill on hacking many important government websites or bank websites. most of the technology users are actually misusing the technology where they have opportunities to develop their skills in many ways.
In conclusion, we have got the modern technology as a blessing but in my opinion, most of the time it is encouraging people in criminal activities in many ways just for the misuses of it.
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1.
It is believed by some pupils that students should learn from online materials rather than printed materials, while some people think that students should learn from printed materials. But, I prefer that students should use offline materials for their study.
Learning from online materials can help students to save their time. For extra curricular activities such as playing, reading books, gardening, and so on. Playing with friends will enhance their ability to have better communication skills with friends, which will also help them in future to have better communication with pupils. Reading extra books except academic books will increase their knowledge. Also, doing other stuff like gardening which is a natural task to do, it will help them to get connect with nature. It will refresh their mind and soul, and will also help to get off daily life boredoms. There is also another main thing in online platform which will also help students to become more expert in online, which is also known as skill development. Many Korean students use online methods in their study which make them more smart in education. Therefore, these things will make a student suitable for future jobs.
On the other hand, many believe that printed materials are more useful for students. As since from the past times pupils are accustomed in printed materials so they believe students can only learn perfectly from offline. It will help them to learn fast, understand fast, and to use them in every field of their lives. In other words, in future they can read and use any important printed files. It will also good for their health, like for the brain to keep things memorable. Also people who used this method in past life, got many benefits, so students can also get many benefits. For instance, Indians students used to study from their offline materials in their past times and it helped them so much that now we can see many knowledgeable books are written by those intelligent pupils. This is why I prefer and use this method while studying.
In conclusion, both online and offline platforms are best for studying, it varies people to people which field they want to use as their study method between online and printed materials.
1. Introduction
Mistake:
It is believed by some pupils that students should learn from online materials rather than printed materials, while some people think that students should learn from printed materials. But, I prefer that students should use offline materials for their study.
Corrections:
Some students believe that learners should study using online materials rather than printed ones, while others think that printed materials are better. However, I prefer that students use printed (offline) materials for their studies.
Explanation:
Avoid repetition of “students” and “printed materials.”
“But” should not start a formal sentence — use “However.”
“For their study” → “for their studies” (correct plural form).
2. First body paragraph (online materials)
Mistake:
Learning from online materials can help students to save their time. For extra curricular activities such as playing, reading books, gardening, and so on.
Corrections:
Learning from online materials can help students save time, which they can use for extracurricular activities such as playing, reading books, or gardening.
Explanation:
Combine into one sentence for grammatical completeness.
“Extracurricular” is one word.
Mistake:
Playing with friends will enhance their ability to have better communication skills with friends, which will also help them in future to have better communication with pupils.
Corrections:
Playing with friends enhances their communication skills, which will also help them in the future to communicate better with others.
Explanation:
Avoid repetition (“friends” twice).
“In future” → “in the future.”
“Pupils” is not suitable here; use “others” or “people.”
Mistake:
Also, doing other stuff like gardening which is a natural task to do, it will help them to get connect with nature.
Corrections:
Also, doing activities like gardening, which is a natural task, helps them connect with nature.
Explanation:
“Get connect” → “connect.”
Remove extra “it will.”
Conclusion
Mistake:
In conclusion, both online and offline platforms are best for studying, it varies people to people which field they want to use as their study method between online and printed materials.
Corrections:
In conclusion, both online and offline platforms are useful for studying. It varies from person to person which method they prefer — online or printed materials.
Explanation:
Split run-on sentence.
“Varies people to people” → “varies from person to person.”
1. Although, Some people think that learners should learn from online, while others feel that printed tasks are more efficient . I definitely agree with that as it can enhance one’s capability to explore different ideas from online.
Studying through online can help a student to collect various information . However, it also saves time, so that a student can clearly focus on their upcoming tests. While studying in college, a student cannot but earn for his livelihood. By exploring through internet, he or she can learn various useful tasks which will help them to increase their academic knowledge as well as general knowledge. Japan, for example, their study system is fully depended on internet , as a result their students are more productive than a normal student.
On the other hand, majority of people think that printed materials can help a learner to improve his or her learning . Using printed materials are seemed to be an old tradition, however it has a great impact on study.
While some students don’t use online material because it leads them to connect with unnecessary social media, and scrolling all the effective hours, resulting a bad impact on their career. In addition, learning by paper materials make a student more responsible and serious . Paper based learning, in the meantime, also help a student to get feedback of their task more efficiently . Finally, printed material, an proficient method, helps a student to make notes easily.
In conclusion, learning by online helps a student to connect with the whole world and it is very useful method in terms of quick learning, nevertheless printed materials can help us to be more responsible about our study.
Getting many ideas by internet also improves our study systems.
Introduction
Original:
Although, Some people think that learners should learn from online, while others feel that printed tasks are more efficient . I definitely agree with that as it can enhance one’s capability to explore different ideas from online.
Corrections:
✅ Although some people think that learners should study online, others feel that printed materials are more effective. I definitely agree with the former view, as online learning can enhance one’s ability to explore different ideas.
Explanation:
“Although,” should not be followed by a comma at the start.
“Some” shouldn’t be capitalized after a comma.
“Learn from online” → “study online” (correct preposition use).
“Printed tasks” → “printed materials.”
“Agree with that” → unclear; specify which side you agree with.
“Capability to explore different ideas from online” → “ability to explore different ideas.”
First body paragraph (online learning)
Original:
Studying through online can help a student to collect various information . However, it also saves time, so that a student can clearly focus on their upcoming tests.
Corrections:
Studying online can help students collect various types of information. Moreover, it saves time, allowing them to focus clearly on their upcoming tests.
Explanation:
“Through online” → “online.”
“Various information” → “various types of information.”
Replace “However” with “Moreover,” since you’re adding a point, not contrasting.
Original:
While studying in college, a student cannot but earn for his livelihood.
Corrections:
While studying in college, a student often needs to earn a living.
Explanation:
“Cannot but earn for his livelihood” → very awkward phrasing.
Use natural English: “needs to earn a living.”
Original:
By exploring through internet, he or she can learn various useful tasks which will help them to increase their academic knowledge as well as general knowledge.
Corrections:
By exploring the internet, students can learn various useful skills that help them increase both their academic and general knowledge.
Explanation:
“Exploring through internet” → “exploring the internet.”
“Tasks” → “skills.”
“He or she… them” → inconsistent pronouns. Use plural “students” consistently.
Original:
Japan, for example, their study system is fully depended on internet , as a result their students are more productive than a normal student.
Corrections:
For example, in Japan, the education system relies heavily on the internet; as a result, their students are more productive than average students.
Explanation:
“Japan, for example, their study system…” → wrong structure.
“Is fully depended on” → “relies heavily on.”
“A normal student” → “average students.”
Second body paragraph (printed materials)
Original:
On the other hand, majority of people think that printed materials can help a learner to improve his or her learning .
Corrections:
On the other hand, the majority of people think that printed materials can help learners improve their learning.
Explanation:
“Majority” needs article “the.”
Pluralize “learners” for consistency.
Remove extra space before period.
Original:
Using printed materials are seemed to be an old tradition, however it has a great impact on study.
Corrections:
Using printed materials may seem old-fashioned; however, it has a great impact on learning.
Explanation:
“Are seemed” → incorrect. Use “may seem.”
“On study” → “on learning.”
Combine ideas smoothly with a semicolon or conjunction.
Original:
While some students don’t use online material because it leads them to connect with unnecessary social media, and scrolling all the effective hours, resulting a bad impact on their career.
Corrections:
Some students avoid online materials because they get distracted by social media and waste valuable time scrolling, which negatively affects their studies.
Explanation:
The sentence is incomplete (“While” needs a main clause).
Simplify structure and make cause-effect clearer.
“Effective hours” → unnatural; use “valuable time.”
Original:
In addition, learning by paper materials make a student more responsible and serious .
Corrections:
In addition, learning from paper materials makes students more responsible and serious.
Explanation:
“By paper materials” → “from paper materials.”
“Make” → “makes.” (Subject-verb agreement).
Original:
Paper based learning, in the meantime, also help a student to get feedback of their task more efficiently .
Corrections:
Paper-based learning also helps students receive feedback on their tasks more efficiently.
Explanation:
“Help” → “helps.”
“Get feedback of” → “receive feedback on.”
“In the meantime” → unnecessary here.
Original:
Finally, printed material, an proficient method, helps a student to make notes easily.
Corrections:
Finally, printed materials, a proficient method, help students make notes easily.
Explanation:
“An proficient” → “a proficient.”
Use plural “materials.”
“Helps a student” → “help students” for consistency.
Conclusion
Original:
In conclusion, learning by online helps a student to connect with the whole world and it is very useful method in terms of quick learning, nevertheless printed materials can help us to be more responsible about our study. Getting many ideas by internet also improves our study systems.
Corrections:
In conclusion, online learning helps students connect with the whole world and is a very useful method for quick learning. Nevertheless, printed materials can make learners more responsible in their studies. Furthermore, gaining ideas through the internet can also improve our overall learning system.
Explanation:
“Learning by online” → “online learning.”
“It is very useful method” → “it is a very useful method.”
“About our study” → “in our studies.”
Fix run-on sentence and improve flow.
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I believe that some students should learn from online materials because some students don’t have sufficient facilities and fund for use printed materials, in contrast printed materials have more opportunity in easy to learn process. I totally agree with first statement cause from everywhere students can reach learning materials by online.
Regarding recent times Learning from online materials is most trending way of learning, cause students from rural area to developed city both can access learning materials at same quality. Moreover, all of the students can apply world class study materials in their learning process by using online materials. As a result everyone can develop them at world class level. For that, online materials are more efficient at quality learning.
1. It is believe by some that student should learn from online materials are the only reasons for study. Others, however, feel that for learning use printed materials are much more better than this. I totally agree with the first statement, because it enhances a student’s thinking power and problem solving ability.
Studying in online materials is essential for learning and gives vast opportunities. We found various types of study materials in online, but sometimes we are engaging with the false sources of learning inadvertently. Nowadays learning from online materials is most trending way of learning , hence, who is belonged to rural areas and who belonged to city can access with the various materials at the same quality.
1.
Although some people prefer to study with online materials while others think that printed materials are better for them. I totally agree with the latter statement, because it enables a student to be competitive.
From my point of view, if an individual learns with printed material, they can get introduced with communicational skills along with studying, which will help them to adapt any situation in the long run. This method is known for a long time. It is believed that this procedure helps to learn or understand a thing better, pupils can have teamwork.
On the other hand, many believe that online learning is better than printed materials, as it have uncountable resources for learning. It helps one to
Introduction
Original:
Although some people prefer to study with online materials while others think that printed materials are better for them. I totally agree with the latter statement, because it enables a student to be competitive.
Corrections:
Although some people prefer to study using online materials, others believe that printed materials are better. I totally agree with the latter view because printed learning enables students to be more competitive.
Explanation:
“Although… while” → redundant. Use only one.
Replace “with online materials” → “using online materials.”
The first sentence was a fragment (dependent clause after “Although”) — it must connect to the next clause with a comma, not a period.
“Better for them” → just “better” (simpler and clearer).
“Because it enables a student” → pluralize for general meaning: “enables students.”
First Body Paragraph
Original:
From my point of view, if an individual learns with printed material, they can get introduced with communicational skills along with studying, which will help them to adapt any situation in the long run.
Corrections:
From my point of view, if individuals learn through printed materials, they can also develop communication skills alongside studying, which will help them adapt to any situation in the long run.
Explanation:
“Learns with printed material” → “learn through printed materials.”
“Get introduced with communicational skills” → wrong phrasing; use “develop communication skills.”
“Adapt any situation” → “adapt to any situation.”
Original:
This method is known for a long time.
Corrections:
This method has been used for a long time.
Explanation:
“Is known for a long time” → incorrect tense; use present perfect (“has been used”).
Original:
It is believed that this procedure helps to learn or understand a thing better, pupils can have teamwork.
Corrections:
It is believed that this approach helps students learn and understand concepts better, and it also encourages teamwork.
Explanation:
“Procedure” → “approach” (more natural for learning methods).
“Helps to learn or understand a thing better” → “helps students learn and understand concepts better.”
Combine with “and it also encourages teamwork” (comma splice fixed).
Although some people think that students should learn from online materials others offer the option of use printed materials remotely. some students believe in the importance of learning from online materials, while other feel that printed materials are better than online materials. The flexibility of online materials from many kinds of devises such as computer ,mobile phone so on provides use printed materials with more benefit to engage in various devise and enhance their overall productivity.
on the other hand, many people believe that online materials decreases our time. online materials make our work easy but it makes addicted technology and social media. printed materials are more better than online materials because printed materials makes a good student more attentive and serious their studies and increase their knowledge. In addition, online materials are very easy way for learning.it is very dangerous way because online materials addicted social media and decreases our important time. Hence, some students waste their important time for social media. They are not more focus their studies for online materials. online materials very harmful for all attentive students .As a result, printed materials increases our knowledge and focus their studies. Many people think that students should learn
1. It is believed by some that students should learn from online materials . Meanwhile, others people think that it is more better to use printed stuffs . I support pupils should learn from online materials .
learning from printed materials can help in many ways. firstly , printed stuffs are more easy to use for student , who do not know how to use internet properly . because some learning materials hard find in internet . secondly , people who have eyes problems that time printed equipment are easy to read compare to online reading . Lastly , it is help increase pupils reading habit. As a example, my brother did not had reading habit . But after read printed stuffs regularly .It was help to increase his reading habit .
On the other hand , many people believe that more benefit learning from online equipment . Learning from online materials are more easier compare to offline stuff .Because online has wind rang of source for learning . So student can find information easily . moreover ,learning from online are more cheaper . so poor student can afford easily . In other word , online classes take by good teacher , which help student to understand topic easier way . For instance , in Bangladesh most of student prefer to learn from online , which help them understand topic at a short time and safe their time .
In conclusion , while learning from online materials are much more easier for student .
Many people think that students should learn from online materials, while others believe that it is better to use printed materials. From my perspective, printed materials are more benificial than online materials because it makes a student more attentive and serious in their studies .
On one hand , online materials are easy to carry. Online materials are saved in many devices ,such as, computer, mobile phone and so on. Sometimes learning from online materials is difficult. Study by online materials is a easy way to wastes a students important time. Nowadays , online study is popular but it is harmful for students . It decrease the amount of ideal students . When a student studied by online materials the take devices . After taking this devices , maximum time students are addicted in online platform and