A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas.
What problems can this cause?
How might these problems be reduced?
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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas.
What problems can this cause?
How might these problems be reduced?
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Development in the lifestyle in the country is majorly beneficial to urban areas than the countryside. In this essay, I will discuss the problems and will provide the solutions for the same.
On the one hand, There are several reasons behind the living standards of people in city areas have been improved. To begin with, the majority of people reside in urban areas hence, they are more prone to development than in villages. On top of it the government emphasizes infrastructure facilities in cities for boosting the economy. For example, In Moulvibazar, the state government had built a 50km, 4 lane highway for better commutation of local people which addressed the traffic issue properly and also save fuels which could help to reduce air pollution in the town.
On the other hand, People who are living in villages have a poor lifestyle because of the following reasons. Firstly, people are predominantly employed in the agricultural industry hence they are living a stagnant lifestyle. Secondly, villagers have less literacy ratio so they have to struggle for basic needs and in villages opportunities are lower than in cities.
To conclude, solving a globe issue is not easy but with the joint efforts of the people, a control can be taken over the problem with the aforementioned suggested measures. I believe that everyone should come forward to mitigate the problem.
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In this contemporary era, a increase in the standard of living in a nation merely reckon to convinced cities rather than countryside . Within upcoming paragraphs , I will explicate stand-points on this issue . while simultaneously discussing the problems it compasses, furthermore, I will put forth potential solution contribute to response to elucidate in the essay.
There are numerous problem can this cause such as crowded, over population , traffic jam and so on. In addition, if individuals lives in cities ,it can effects increase over population, whereas village areas people cannot procure any facilities. Because there have no jobs and no amenities of rural areas. For instance, people crowded in cites ,therefore , these places will be noise and traffic jam,
There are several solutions on this problem . First solution is that, when people lived in both areas ,it assists reduce over population and noise. Second solution is that, although public lives in town it aids standard living ,rural areas people
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#There are numerous problems this can cause, such as crowding, overpopulation, traffic jams, and so on.
#If individuals live in cities, it can affect the increase in overpopulation
#Whereas people in village areas cannot procure any facilities.
#There are several solutions to this problem.
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Nowadays, advantage of living in cities normally people get better facilities than rural areas .this might to lead to less growth of people and including facilities it can be mitigate this issue.
There are several reasons of this cause ,the major issue is growth of people in cities. Many of the people prefer to stay in the cities so that they can get better institutions for study purposes ,medical accessories for having healthy .As a result traffic congestion will increased in town. Thus office manager could not reach in the destination within the period. If people live in town ,shopping mall rate will rise more than rural area. Because of increasing rate middle class people could not buy their things which they needed .
There are various way to reduce this issues .At first and foremost is growing facilities in rural areas as cities .For example, local people can involve to cultivate rice, vegetables as a income source after that they sell in the local market so that they can earn money .
#Nowadays, the advantage of living in cities is that people normally get better facilities than in rural areas.
#This might lead to less growth of people, and with proper facilities, this issue can be mitigated.
#There are several reasons for this; the major issue is the growth of people in cities.
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Nowadays, people have better opportunities to live in cities which is beneficial rather than villages, the effects of people living in cities appear to be rooted , including less facilities in rural areas and living rural regions lag behind, however, the problem has some solution instead.
On the one hand, as people prefer cities more, government gives all type of better facilities in cities like educational opportunities, medical treatment, greater construction, marketing and business development etcetera, while villagers cannot get these type of establishments at all. In addition, living in rural areas, peoples lag behind because they cannot get their needed facilities for living and they cannot rise their economical features.
On the other hand, if government took same measures for both urban and rural areas, villagers can get the same opportunities and they can grow up as like the city people. And government should give their needed opportunities to lead their life with all kind of facilities like urban people.
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Nowadays, people have better opportunities to live in cities, which is more beneficial than living in village…..
however, the problem has some solutions instead.
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And the government should provide the necessary opportunities so that they can lead their lives with all kinds of facilities like urban people.
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It is considered that in this modern era it can often see that cities development increasing day by day rather than countrysides. As a result, rural areas inhabitants not getting enough investment from government due to lack of peoples as well as crowd are increasing dramatically in cities. However, some measures should be taken to solve this problems.
On the one hand, on of the most crucial effect is to seems more benefits in cities is people are moving to urban areas for getting more facilities. Because, majority of hospitals, universities etc are located in cities. That is why, villages inhabitants are moving to cities to get this kind of advantages to urban areas. As a consequence, government do not give enough concentrate on villages and the development of countrysides are determine rapidly.In addition, another effect is cities crowded also rise dramatically due to moving individuals from villages. For that reason, traffic conjunction,air pollution are increasing drastically for over crowded.
On the other hand , to mitigate this problems government should more invest on villages such as increasing job facilities, hospitals, universities etc. As a result, individuals will like to stay in countrysides instead of cities. Furthermore, government should increase the rate of tax for living in cities like income tax, insurance etc. As a result, people will reduce to move cities from village. For example, in 2019 Egypt government surge income tax on inhabitants of urban areas for control over crowd in cities.
To sum up, in spite of having adverse effect on countryside, there are some action to solve this effect such as government should increase the the development on countryside and rise the ratio of tax on cities inhabitants.
Because, majority of hospitals, universities etc are located in cities.
-This is because the majority of hospitals, universities, etc. are located in cities.
As a result, people will reduce to move cities from village.
-As a result, people will be less likely to move from villages to cities.
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In addition, another effect is cities crowded also rise dramatically due to moving individuals from villages.
-In addition, another effect is that city crowds also rise dramatically due to people moving from villages.
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It is seen that nowadays people have tendency to live in urban areas where they find plenty of benefit rather than rural areas because of this, village people are getting less facilities, such as educational lacking (schools, collages and university), good hospital and job with handsome salary. However, some measure can be taken to tackle this issue.
On the one hand, one major issue that facing who lives in country site which is education, there has no good environment of education, such as schools, collage. As a result, they could not pass in exam compare to urban area student, they have modern technology, libarary, science lab where they can practice all the time and get good result in exam. For example, a recent report showed many toddler had participate different competitions from city school student. Another problem is internet connection, people who live in village, they can not connect with social media due to poor internet connection, while people who lives in city they have wifi that is why they can use social media namely Netflix, Facebook and Youtube. As a result, they can watch newspaper, video.
On the other hand, to overcome this problem. Government showed provide modern facility in country site and
On the one hand, one major issue faced by those who live in rural areas is the lack of educational facilities, as there is no proper learning environment such as well-equipped schools or colleges.
For example, a recent report showed that many toddlers participated in different competitions held in city schools.
Modern facility- modern facilities
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