Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.
Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
writing que 1
Nowadays many individual argued that spending their lives doing similar work to avoid changing things, However, others have different view of point they think it is great to change habit after a certain time. In my perspective, I think people have their own way but it is better to change thing after a time. Although it depend which kind of activity people should change with time.
To begin with,people have their own routine which they follow to do their daily work .some people do same activity every day since they make the habit such as reading newspaper .To explain, a study shown that around 70% people wake up in the morning and the first thing they do is drinking coffee before doing any other work. In addition,most of the people have same work in their daily life such as women doing their house work everyday not only the women but also the men their wake in a specific time to go for office so this kind of thing their do every day in their life they an nit avoid it.
On the other hand, If a person doing same work every day It will affect them in future.For example. most of the government employee do their job for a long time but after they become 60 year old they have to take retirer .And they feel alone but if they can do the same work for life long it will be great for them .
In conclusion,Its is good to change habit after a period.But always doing the same work it will increased peoples’ skills.I believe it is a great way to exploring new thing and make new habit.
Writing que:2
Nowadays technologies had a great impact on individuals’ life.It become momentous for human since it provide us every thing which akin in our daily life.Without technologies life will be hard .Its change teenagers spending free time .In my opinion,it affect children life in a positive way,However, it has some drawback also.
On the one hand,In this modern ear children have all the facilities compare to past. They can learn any thing by using internet and gain knowledge about the world. Technologies make children life easier because it provide them every information they needed and it build their confident .For example, a teenager can give exam through the internet.Moreover, they can get feedback from other nations teachers.It make them more creative.
On the other hand,It make children isolated as a result child only use mobile phone in their free time rather than spending that time doing outdoor activity. It will affect they mental health such as lack of communication with others it not only affect mental health but also it effect pysical health if children spend free time in internet it will causes obesity.In addition, it become a national issue for every one. the main reason of obesity is creating by techonologies children spend hours on it as a result it make eyesight issues. Most of the children use it in wrong way and some are the victim of it.
To conclude, Technologies is a gift for everyone. Although, it has some demerit such as eyesight issues and lead to obesity,I,However,believe it has several drawback but the advantages are outweigh.
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Question 1
A group of individuals presents the view that it can be better to avoid change in our lives, while others believe that change can bring unique opportunities. I strongly agree with the latter opinion and here are some reasons.
On the one hand, we need to change to keep up with the world’s development. If we still keep old, outdated ways of doing and thinking while the world becomes more and more modern, we will feel like we are left behind by the whole world. For example, today’s world is increasingly concerned about human rights, feminism, and respect for women, but if we still respect men and look down on women, we will feel like we cannot integrate with the world.
On the other hand, change helps us achieve success beyond our expectations. Sometimes changing the way we think and work differently will help us do things that no one else has been able to do. For instance, Smart Bangladesh instead of following the path of his predecessors, followed his own path. And after many days and months,
he liberated the nation after fifteen of years of domination and established the Socialist Republic of Bangladesh.
In conclusion , we should not keep doing the same things in life. Let’s change and do different things to keep up with the world’s development and achieve success.
Question 2
In recent years, most children spend an excessive amount of time on their smartphones daily or with other technologies. While this trend provides several benefits, I personally believe that the drawbacks far outweigh them.
On the one hand, there are several benefits of new technologies for children, such as communication and making friends. They can talk to each other by video calling, messaging, and email which can make a beneficial impact on verbal skills, attention, and overall sociability. Technology can also encourage problem-solving skills by challenging children to solve complex problems. Video games or technical tasks frequently contain complex problems that children must solve. If they do not, they cannot advance in the game. Due to the fact children are often willing to spend long periods of time playing video games, they frequently face these problems and must persevere as they attempt to solve them. This can be an effective way to teach children problem-solving skills.
On the other hand, one of the most obvious adverse aspects of technology is its impact on children’s physical health. Numerous children spend most of their time playing video games and have made it a part of their daily lives. Playing a video game for a long time can result in extremely bad health, mostly future outcomes. They might end up needing to wear glasses. The best way to help fix the child’s physical health is to tell them to either reduce their amount of time spent on electronics or instead use a number of time to have regular exercise.
In conclusion, I want to say that modern technology has made children obese, unhealthy and socially awkward. They don’t have any real friends, and they don’t have any social skills. Therefore, in my opinion, the advantages of such a development pale in comparison with the disadvantages.
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Although, it is preferred by some people to pass their lives by doing the same things and avoiding changes, while other people think that, ,changes is always a better option than doing the same things. and i firmly disagree with this statement because doing the same things led us to remain our work speed and there are no chance to do any mistake.
On the one hand, it often thought by some people that , changes is always a good things rather than doing same things in their lives. First of all , it might be help people to acquire knowledge about new things. Secondly, it might be assist people to broaden their knowledge. A recent study showed that, because of thinking changes is always a beneficial things for spending our daily lives, about 50% Canadian are able to boost their knowledge. Hence , it is more advantageous to think that changes has lots of benefits to passing our daily lives, from others perspective.
On the other hand , other people choose to pass their daily live by doing the same things and avoiding changes , would have many merits. And i completely agree with this statement. At the threshold point, doing the same things in our daily lives and avoiding changes give us a low chance to doing mistake in any work. As a result, our doing work would be more accurate. In addition, doing same things and avoiding changes help us to do our work rapidly . Because doing the same things keep our work speed very fast .As a consequences , we would be able to develop in our lives and we can achieve success. A recent study observed that , about 80% Americans people became fast to doing the same things in their daily lives. Therefore, doing the same things and avoiding lives makes people lives more convenient and fruitful.
To conclude, though some people think that changes in doing things in daily lives has a lots of benefits , i completely disagree with this statement because doing same things in daily lives led us to fast in our work and it give us low chances to doing mistake.
There is an opinion asserting that, new gadgets have changed the method children pass their leisure time. In my opinion , the advantages of this trend do not outweigh the disadvantages because it has a lots of disadvantages.
On the one hand , there is an opinion that , children spend their free time the way have changed by using new technologies . And it has some advantages. First of all, new invention of modern technology in their leisure time led the children to refresh their mind after their school. Secondly, at night when the children get free time they watch many motivational videos by using these modern technology. As a result , they became motivated on their study. A recent study showed that, for using new technologies in free time , made 50% Canadian children motivated on their study.
On the other hand, it is thought that, modern gadget have changed the method children spend their free time. and it has a lots of benefits. Firstly, for using technology in their free time children became addicted to this devices. As a result, they do not concentrate on their study. Additionally, there are create a huge mental or physical issues for using digital devices in childrens free time. For using these devices in free time they suffer some mental issue and they suffer a lot for obeysity. A recent study showed that , about 80% Canadians are suffer mental problems for using digi
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FIRST QS ANS :
Although few individual believed that spending for lives the same way and no need to changing life rules, while others argued that changing is always momentous for daily life leads. I think that changing for spending time good thing. Because gain new experience and focus for new task break boredom their life.
On the one hand, spend time for their living same away get bad habit and also getting depression. One major reason is gain new experience for there life. If needs to new something should changed their lifestyle, because they new feature are unlock and better life leads them. For instance, they should enjoy that moment new thinking and new path. One study that true by them to changed lifestyle can improve there living path and gain life more frequently. However, they also can relief by over stress can make life new roles and avoiding past live path, making life more easy and natural that helps for people how are over bad situation at that time.
ON the other hand, another main cause is avoid same path for living is they focus also new task to break there boredom life. If anyone living very hard work in there life he much need break for them to mental heath freshness and avoid over stress. Many people think that, over work and stress always bad for everyone life. because that stress break there heart and damage gain for mind. Moreover, they can enjoy moment for family and changed for life rules that can benefits for people life, going for trips and travel for relatives homes can help for life. In contrast, they can thinking new way always good for life.
To sum up, although I think changing life can not always akin for life, while that improve our heath and gain better experience for our spending time.
SECOND QS ANS :
Nowadays, technology has become popular for all ages people in modern world. Because there several section encourage them and attention people. New technologies have changed the way for children spend their free time. I totally disagree for that, that create eye problems and socialism. they always spend play or spending time with technology.
On the one hand, new technology uses someway are beneficial, because technology create new sector to earn money sector. Children can use that to right way they can helpful for there life. Such as learning and creative something can good for them, while anyone no friends are available that technology can reduce there free time, also some time can technology helping mental stress stop. For example, anyone needs help for difficult situation that time use phone someone that helped always good for everyone one. Moreover, technology using for beneficial that should for all people and young generation.
On the other hand, technology has become popular, however there drawback created. Firstly, over time uses harmful for children life, like eye problem created. I think if they addicted too much that effect there eyes created mental issues. However, another main disadvantage is create lack of socialism, because anyone over addicted for uses technology they do not thinking how can social are stay and growing, they much time spend on uses that. For instance, one study in London university showed over uses technology user affected by many of diseases and also some children created murder or crime by addicted by over using that can harmful for children. thus, issues I disagree for children using technology for free time.
In conclusion, many ways for children using technology spend their free time good, while more of them created disadvantages such as eye problems and lack of socialism. those issues I think that is not for good in children using there free time.
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First question’s answer:
Although it is preferred by few individuals that spending whole life in a loop and avoiding changes, while others do not have positive notion regarding this. From my perspective, I think that individuals should spend their life by trying new things because it boosts experience and broaden mind.
On the one hand, some people lead a lifestyle in same way. The first and foremost reason behind this is feel comfortable. If a person get comfort to any activity, they do not want to change this habit. They always perform their best is this sector due to they are used to with this. Furthermore, there is another reason of this is fear of risks. People do not want to take risks by performing something distinct, they always stay busy by doing their regular activity. I remembered one of my uncles , though he deserve better position in teaching, he is still teaching is a primary school because of comfort.
On the other hand, it is a habit of some people by changing activities in their life. The most valid reasons behind it is because they want to gain their experience and broaden their mind. If a person always try to taste different things, he will going to get a bunch of knowledge either fascinating or worst. A survey carried our by “BBC NEWS” that those who experience distinct things rather than doing same activity, they always prosper in their life than those who likes to connected with same activity.
To sum up, although people may vary in their opinion about perform same activities everyday or changing . I personally believe that it is better to alteration things so that boost knowledge and mind.
Second question’s answer:
Nowadays, by using modern technology teenagers are spending their free time. Although there are some merits of this this, to my way of thinking, I believed that the demerits such as antisocial and obesity outweigh the advantages.
In terms of benefits of using technology, the first and foremost reason behind this is learning new skills. It is a become a common matter of learning skills through modern technology such as smartphone, laptop and tap. Children can effortlessly obtain modern skills in their leisure time via this technology. Recently I have seen in an advertisement that nowadays children learning new modern skills through laptop which was not possible in the past. In addition, another significant reason is entertainment. In past it was hard to get entertainment sources, whereas now it is very easy to entertain youngsters themselves by social media in smartphone. Likewise, they can chat with their friends in their leisure time which can build their friendship stronger.
In contrast, one of the most effective drawback is becoming anti-social. If teenagers always spend their free time on modern technology, they become anti-social and do not connected with people which is dramatically effect their socialization. For this reason in future, they might face some issues. Moreover, another major demerit of it is obesity. Since youngsters are often stay connected with modern technology, they do not participate in any kind of outdoor activities it can effect their health. A recent study showed by “Cambridge University” is that 90% teenagers of the USA are become obesity due to spending leisure time on new technology.
In conclusion, In my opinion, I personally believe that the major drawbacks like become anti-social and increase obesity are more that the benefits.
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Nowadays, some people choice to live their lives by avoiding the changes and doing the same thing throughout the rest of their life. While, other people the prefer changes, good thing is change always.
To begin with, individual are not very fond of changes. They get used to of doing the same thing rapidly and get comfortable. They do not want to get out of there comfort area, by the time it became their habit. And these trends are for particularly some people. Moreover, other people think that changes is always a good thing. change devolup person mind also devolup there physical abelites. By changes individual can get learn various different things from different soures.
On the other hand , I believe that, changes a is always a good thing. changes devolup individuals mentally and physically. By changes people can get know about new skill and they can apply it in there regular life also. With changes people get through an enjoyable moments. Such as , for changes people most of the time people change their work place, for that people get more confident and grow individuality.
In conclusion, changes is momentous for people for grow confidently. Not only for grow confidently but also for devoluping new skills.
The invention of new technologies day by day have changed the way once teenagers spend their leisure time. children used to spend their free time by playing at playground with others. where they were more socialize and more active. Not only they were creative or socialize but also creative.
Firstly, by the time technologies growing so rapidly in todays world. people can not think their life without technology now. its become most esential part of once life, and by the growth children also getting addicted of various technologies such as computer, laptop, mobile phone, television etc. Nowadays, kid loved to spend their free time by playing video games, watching cartoons, animation moves also much more. with time they are getting addicted with those advance tech.
On the other hand, with the positive side there is also a negative side which outweighing the advantages. the devolupment of technology has both views. In my prespctive, the advantages are more. In todays world children are not more social rather then past. Not also unsocial they are getting affected physically also. Like for using mobile phone for a long time its affected our eyesight also with the ovesithy. children getting know about mobile phone or advance technology at such a young ages that by the time they get addicted of these technology. Whereas, the mind of young people do not depolop as it should be. they do not go to play outside as a result they get to devolup a new skill and not get avail to be strong enough both physically and mentally.
In conclusion, as a result children did not depolup as they should. they became unsocial. so they should use less technology.
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Although,it is sometimes thought that spend their lives doing same activity avoid the change,while other individual believe that change is always better has a huge amount of advantages.In my opinion I strongly believe that change is always good due to future goal achieve and and avoiding change something good such business or personal activities.
On the one hand ,few people like do there same things and avoiding change since individual love own activities and new acitivites many of time risky such as business.In addiction,old business lost of profit and achieve a respect However,old thing not only profite but also boost confidence. As a result, people not change their think and achieve success. Recent study showed that ,in Bangladeshi lost of people do not change think do same business generation to generation and reduce unemplyment issues.
On the other hand, other people love change their think because few indivudals believe change think enhance knowladge and success future. Lots of students change their study method include the digital platfrom such as internet, laptops and many others. In addiction, students achieve good result and fullfill there demand. As result, change think increase good result and remove stress for the students and parents. for instant, one of my friends Rima she very stress her study change the study system boost her confidence and achieve a good result.
To conclude ,few people do not like to change their think and other people love it because change think not only confidence increase the future goals and other view avoidind since to before knowledge and experience is batter more than new think.
TEST:2
Although modern gadgets change the way children spend their free time. this advantages some help the students study or extra curiculam and several drawback scrious sickness. In my opinion I strongly believe that modern technology lost of risky for the children and young.
On the one hand, new technology change the children leisure time lots of children love video games and use technology for the study ,In addiction add technology study perpouse growth knowledge and survibe difficulties surching google solve quickly. As result,students built their confidence. And video games children enjoy their free time at present parent are busy business and job. children spend free time enjoyable. Recent survey that, in indian lost of parents bust their job and business children spend quality time spent video games.
On the other hand, modern technology children use lots of disadvantages such as, crime and mental health to much ussing technology children
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