The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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WT-1, 19/10/2025, Premium-142
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The diagram give information change the floor plan of a public library.
Overall, The central library floor plan is dramatically change in present day.
The tables & chairs was middle of the library floor. CDs, videos, computer games was north west in the library and adult fiction books was west side in library floor. Reading room was south west in the floor. Children’s books was north east in the library. Adult non-fiction books are east side and the enquiry desk was south east in the library floor.
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#overview could be better
#diagram give information change the floor plan of a public library – diagram gives information on changing the floor plan of a public library
#Overall, The – Overall, the (avoid unnecessary capitalisation)
#tables & chairs was – tables & chairs were
#was south west in the floor – was in the south west of the floor
BAND – 3.5
The picture depicts floor design of a public library in the past and how it looks in the present day after 20 years later.
Overall, the library witnessed a noticeable changes and added some new infrastructure. For instance, lecture room, sofa, computer room, and cafe.
In terms of central library 20 years ago, there was table and chairs in the middle of the library, and beside that the main entrance was located in the south part. Both side of the table and chairs there was found adult and non-adult fiction books. In the northeastern part, children’s books were placed, and CDs, videos, computer games situated next to it. Moreover, in the southeastern and southwestern part there were enquiry desk and reading room was located respectively.
On the other hand, current state of central library, there is new lecture room which replaced by children’s books, and the information desk is relocated infront of it. A new cafe is made in the southeastern part, and some new self-service machines organized next to the cafe. However, reading room is demolished, where computer room is situated.
#depicts floor – depicts the floor
# added some new infrastructure. For instance, – added some new infrastructure, such as
#there was table – there were tables
# Both side of the table and chairs – On both sides of the table and chairs(,)
#there was found adult and non-adult fiction books. -there were found adult and non-adult fiction books.
#in the southeastern and southwestern part there were enquiry desk and reading room was located respectively. – in the southeastern and southwestern parts, there were enquiry desk and reading room located respectively.
#lecture room which replaced – lecture room(,) which is replaced
#the information desk is relocated infront of it – the information desk has been developed in front of it
#avoid silly mistakes to increase the band
BAND – 6.0
The pictures portrays the floor design of a public library at present and 20 years ago.
Overall, the floor design of the library has gone through some massive changes, by which the floor design look more beautiful at present. However, new cafe, computer room, lecture room are built over the period.
In past, there were tables & chairs in center of the library, and in the bottom of the library there was the entrance. In the northeast corner, children’s books were placed, whereas in the northeast corner CDs, videos, computer games are placed. Moreover, adult fiction books were situated in right side of the library, while in the opposite side there were adult non-fiction books. In the left side of the entrance there was reading room, where newspaper & magazines are kept and in the opposite site there was enquiry desk.
After 20 years, reading room is replaced by computer room, similarly enquiry desk is converted to cafe. At present , there is nothing in middle of the library. Children’s room is demolished and lecture room is built there. Likewise, CDs, videos computer games are placed away and sofa and story telling events happen now.
#pictures portrays – picture portrays
#In past – in the past
#northeast corner CDs, – northwest corner CDs,
newspaper & magazines are kept – newspaper & magazines was kept
#opposite site – opposite side
#Likewise, CDs, videos computer games are placed away – Likewise, CDs, videos computer games are remodeled/transformed
BAND – 6.5
The diagram illustrates the room plan of public library of 20 years ago and how they look today.
Overall, the table gives details about central library 20 years before and present. the cd, videos, computer games at left side on the corner. on the right side of the corner children books.
In terms of the central library present, the sofa at the left of the corner and the middle of the storytelling events and the left side of a sofa and the end of the room was children fictions books. and the left side of a lecture room. and the middle of the all reference books houses and the down fall of a computer room.
On the other side of the library house, the lecture room was changed. In the past there was childrens books here. now there is a lecture room. and the just fall down there was adult fiction is still here. and the last stage of a coffee houses changed
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#poor overview
#sentence making
#body 1 – organization
#body 2 – tense+organisation
#the end of the room was children – unclear
# down fall of – unclear
#lecture room – wrong information
# In the past – In the past(,)
BAND 4.5
The diagram illustrates how a central library modified between 20 years time period.
Overall, central public library modernized into several sections and new sections also added. However, in the middle section of library there was tables and chairs are which were removed present time.
20 years ago, in the eastern corner there was a child books section and south area covered with a enquiry desk where people can buy tickets, books return and between this two section there was an adult non-fiction area. In the middle part depicted a area surrounded with tables and chair, whilst an adult fiction books area situated in other side in west part. CDs, videos, computer games corner were found in northern part and an reading section area situated in other corner beside the adult books section.
On the other hand, at present time this area modified with several parts. 2 sofa are added in the northern corner and games section turned in storytelling events and child fiction area. Enquiry desk turned into cafe zone while, self-service machines and information desk, while,reding area removed and it turns in computer room
#body 1 – organisation
#the middle section of library – the middle section of library(,)
# there was tables and chairs are which were removed present time – there were tables and chairs in the middle, which were removed later
#eastern corner – eastern corner(,)
#south area covered with a enquiry desk – unclear
#at present time this area modified with several parts – at present time(,) this area is modified with several parts
#2 sofa are added in the northern corner – wrong information
#while, – (,)while
#reding – reading
BAND – 5.5
the chart below shows the plan of a library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
Overall, the majority of central library 20 years ago, this library have a CDs, videos, computer games and left sight children’s books, and under the library have reading room and right sight enquiry desk. however, for a largest part of library reading room.
In terms the central library today’s position is the largest room is children’s fiction books room this room have a sofa and the right sight lecture room the small room is lecture room today’s pos
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#the chart below shows – The chart shows
# this library have a CDs – this library had CDs
#left sight – left side
BAND – 3.5
The maps illustrate the floor plan of a people library 20 years ago and it looks now.
Overall, central library 20 years ago, this map center tables and chairs, but today tables and chairs hide. Central library 20 years ago right up side children books than today change lecture room .
In central library 20 years ago tables and chairs right side adult non-fiction books, but today there adult fiction books ( information desk) and new item self-service machines. Central library 20 ago this map left down side reading room (newspaper & magazines) recently there new computer room.
In central library today this map left up side storytelling events and two sofa and children fiction books, but 20 year ago there were CDs, videos, computer games. central library today right down side cafe then 20 years ago there was enquriy
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#sentence making
#organisation
#maps illustrate – map illustrates
#plan of a people library 20 years ago and it looks now. – plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
#today tables and chairs hide – today tables and chairs are demolished
#In central library 20 years ago – In central library(,) 20 years ago(,)
#Central library 20 ago this map left down side reading room – unclear
# today this map left up side storytelling events – unclear
BAND – 4.5
The map illustrates the floor plan of a public library after 20 years and how it looks now.
Overall, the map has a sighnificantly changes over the years. There has a several facilites , a Lecture room, stroytelling events, all reference books, added cafe, a Self-service machine and a Computer room.
In terms of 20 years ago, the Central Library had a Children’s bokks in northest corner. CDs, videos computer games was northest part in Central Library. Moreover, in center was Tables and chairs in that place and right side had a Adult non-fiction books, while left side had a adult fiction books. And south east corner had enquary desk and southwest corner haad Reading books.
Before 20 years, in central librqary had a massive devolopment. Children’s books replaced including Lecture room. In centar had a empty after 20 years. CDs, vedios, computer games demolished and including strotelling events, Enquiry desk repleced by a Cafe. In contrast All reference books had devoloped and Self-service including by adult fuction and adult non fuction.
#overview could be better
#organisation
#the map has a sighnificantly changes – the map had a significant change
#In terms of 20 years ago – 20 years ago
#here has – here are
#bokks – books
#CDs, videos computer games was northest part in Central Library – CDs, videos, and computer games were located in the northwest part of the Central Library
#enquary – enquiry # librqary – library
#Before 20 years – wrong information
# In centar had a empty after 20 years – unclear
BAND – 4.5